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Glee - Fic: Gold Star for Effort

Nov 29, 2009 22:34

Title: Gold Star for Effort
Fandom: Glee
Summary: Written for this prompt. Basically, Rachel realises how good Arties voice is, and promptly falls for him.
Pairing: Rachel/Artie
Rating: NC-17

AN: Written for glee_kink, this is het romance (which I never write) leading to smut (which I rarely write). I’d never thought of this pairing until I read the ( Read more... )

fic: glee

Comments 20

anonymous November 29 2009, 19:23:43 UTC

THIS IS SO AWESOME. I don't think it was out of character, I do think you should write more.

oroborusfox November 29 2009, 20:24:08 UTC

Oh, thank god. And thank you! I cannot promise more, but you never know...

WOW. anonymous November 29 2009, 20:23:26 UTC

i never thought of this pairing until i read this. but it is awesome. i think you have thier voices down. that pretty much rocked!

Re: WOW. oroborusfox November 29 2009, 20:24:50 UTC

Thank you so much!

lorilann November 29 2009, 20:26:34 UTC

Aww, I love this. This was so very sweet.

“I think I’ll be able to go again in about twenty minutes.” I love this. Oh, Artie.

oroborusfox November 29 2009, 20:31:35 UTC

Thank you.

Lol, I figured he'd want to make it up to her for not quite getting her over the line the first time.

anonymous November 29 2009, 22:12:16 UTC

Hee, I was the OP. This was perfect! You definitely got them in character, especially Rachel!
And I absolutely love this bit about not wanting to watch him change seats so he won't get uncomfortable and then finding it REALLY HOT because YES.
I hope you write more!

oroborusfox November 30 2009, 08:47:28 UTC

So glad you enjoyed it! But curse your prompt, because now I think I kinda ship it?

anonymous November 30 2009, 00:14:59 UTC

okay.. now i kind of want more.. *hints*

oroborusfox November 30 2009, 08:47:48 UTC

An idea is brewing...