Sucker Punch - Fic: Everybody's Looking For Something

[oroborusfox]

Title: Everybody's Looking For Something
Fandom: Sucker Punch
Summary: A fill for this: Baby Doll is a virgin and Sweet Pea decides it would be better to lose it with her than the High Roller.
Pairing: Sweet Pea/Baby Doll
Rating: Hard R
AN:Apparently I've decided to stop being embarrassed about writing porn. It's still full of feelings though.
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Comments

[cameron_sarah]

Tots just wrote something similar. :P I can so see Sweet Pea doing that for Baby Doll. I love it.

Sweet Pea lingers to wash her hands, but can’t quite get all the blood from beneath her nails.
Best line. :)

[oroborusfox]

I actually read yours earlier today! Enjoyed it a lot.

Glad you enjoyed my take on it.

[cameron_sarah]

Haha. Awesome! It was the first fic idea I got while watching the movie. :P Glad I wasn't the only one who thought of it. :D

[youreyesaregems]

This is wonderful! I love Sweet Pea's characterisation - the bit where she can't quite explain what she means to Baby is perfect. I love the angst, and that you didn't drive it home too hard, just kind of let it be there.

[oroborusfox]

Thanks so much.

[ketchup_fights]

Oh, ow. My heart. This was lovely, and fucked up and sad. There's something so striking in the detail of the blood under the fingernails.

Great work!

[oroborusfox]

"This was lovely, and fucked up and sad."

Totally my favourite comment I have ever recieved. Thank you!