LJ Idol S11 Week 2: Living Rent Free Inside Your Head

Oct 06, 2019 11:04


“I love you.”

It’s whispered gently in her head and reverberates somewhere above her left eye, where her grandmother is buzzing around today.

Arvilla stirs clockwise six times, taps her wooden spoon thrice against the copper cauldron, and speaks the magic words. Then, with her grandmother’s love humming in her mind like a kiss, she decants the ( Read more... )

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millysdaughter October 10 2019, 04:16:01 UTC
Sweet and hopeful. I enjoyed it.

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d0gs October 10 2019, 08:15:56 UTC
I loved this; the characters felt very real to me :D

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marlawentmad October 10 2019, 16:11:42 UTC

Oh my sweet tender heart, this is cozy. I love the dynamic of Grandmother resting inside her grand daughter's head. I am mighty curious to hear Grandmother'a stories, now, too. What a life lived!

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brienneofsnark October 10 2019, 20:33:12 UTC
This is a very sweet, very fun entry. It's engaging and well written. Nicely done!

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adoptedwriter October 11 2019, 12:01:05 UTC
A grandma story! Love it!

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