LJ Idol S11 Week 6: Solviture Ambulando

[orockthro]

There is spittle in her hair. Amenanta is standing over her, made hazy by her blurred vision and the swirling red dust. She looks like a god, smug and powerful.

“Walk it off,” Amenanta says from above her, arms crossed over her chest, and Heilia feels something boil in her belly. It’s red hot, and it wants to crawl out of her, and so she lets it

Comments

[millysdaughter]

I want the next chapter!

[rayaso]

This was very well written, and cries out for more. This is a peak into something larger, so I hope you add to it.

[bleodswean]

Such flawless world building! Really a joy to watch you work with words!

[halfshellvenus]

Ooh, so dark and fascinating, with an intriguing dystopic future in the background.

It makes us wonder about Heilia's relationship with Amenata, and why she doesn't just get farther away. Or maybe farther away is unlivable, and they few people left are stuck in this small stretch of land trying to survive.

[pixiebelle]

Oh that’s well done! Really well done.