[Fanfic] Deep End, Chapter 3

[oroja]

Title: Deep End
Pairings: Ryopi (main), others to come
Genre: au, drama, romance
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own those guys only in my imagination.
Summary: War altered everything. The world, people, reality. When two young men met each other in a place where they never should be together, something changed. Maybe some people can call it "fate", maybe

Comments

[snow_meow]

So Kame has come into the picture which means Jin will have a new friend.

Kitagawa's comment that Ryo is like his dad is scary. It gives me a bad feeling that it's not a compliment but a warning.

I am wondering who is it that Pi talks to on the phone.
After Pi's converstation, I am wondering about Pi's actions and behaviour...was everything done to gain Ryo's attention?

[oroja]

Yeah, I couldn't leave Jin alone. He needs someone to play with too xd

Isn't it sometimes like that? When actually compliment is a warning, and when harsh words are compliment? Everything is depending on the context... The problem is, that we don't know Ryo's father. Damn, too bad that I can't resurrect him xd

And about Pi's actions... maybe he's not sure what he's doing? Or maybe he is? Wait! I'm gonna ask him, maybe he will tell me at least something ;)

[fullhouse_10]

seriously I'm so ridiculously happy with this update: I mean they kissed...twice!!!!
and I'm really looking forward to the next chapters^^

what confuse me a little is this line "It’s Yamashita! Kamenashi-san told us to catch him!”
Isn't Kame Pi's friend???
I'm more and more curious about this man Pi talks to on the phone too :)
there is again many mystery in this fic...

oh and the little moment between kame and jin was sweet (though I'm not at all an akame fan lol)

thanks for sharing!! <3

[oroja]

I told, that I will update soon xd

And again you and your questions. You know that I'm not Santa Claus and I can't give you any answers, right? But damn, I look good in red, so maybe I will explain something in next chapter ;)

Thanks for reading ♥

[fullhouse_10]

XDD I know, I know you can't... but I 'm just hoping you would tell me everything (in my dreams^^)

Ja!!

[oroja]

You know, you should dream about something else. I don't know... for example when you're walking naked through town or when you're killing those who you hate ;)

Take care!

[droot]

So it was Kame! I love the way Jin is talking to him immediatly! xD
I'm beginning to love Akame! xD

The RyoPi scene at Pi's was sooo.. love! ^^
And they kissed twice! I can't believe it! So soon!

But I want to know who is Pi talking to!! And why is he acting like that with Ryo after the phone call..
Oh! And also.. The Kamenashi-san the group who was beating the old man mentionned isn't Kame, right?

I hope we will know more things in the next chapter because your fic is full of mysteries.. Well, we already learn things in this chapter but.. I wanna know more! xD
Ah~ I really love this dark atmosphere!

[oroja]

*crazy, evil laugh* too many things you don't know? Well, me too, I can't keep up with my imagination ;)

Theoretically they kissed only once. That first time was more like challenge, but the second one, yeah, it was real xd And it wasn't too soon, don't treat them like normal people (or maybe it happened because I hate those stories when any action will take a place in 30th chapter).

And why is he acting like that with Ryo after the phone call you mean that tour? If yes, then, like that guy on the phone told, Ryo wasn't one of them, so maybe Pi's trying to make him like that... Or no, maybe it's something else...

Kamenashi... it's Kame's surname, so I don't know, maybe it's him? ;)

Thanks for reading ♥ (and sorry if that reply pissed you, I just like to mock).

[badbatazz]

mmm kame as pi ally & jin as ryo ally... still wondering what exactly is yamapi & has ryo fallen for pi???

[oroja]

Sorry for that, I went into standard :(
what exactly is yamapi - he's definitely a human ;) Although when sometimes I'm looking at his photos, I'm wondering about that ;)

Thanks for reading ♥

[oroja]

You know what? I don't know how I'll do it or when, but now I'm definitely going to finish that nc-17. And please - record your death for me ;)

[oroja]

I'll see what I can do ;)