[Fanfic] Deep End, Chapter 4

[oroja]

Title: Deep End
Pairings: Ryopi (main), Akame, others to come
Genre: au, drama, romance
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own those guys only in my imagination.
Summary: War altered everything. The world, people, reality. When two young men met each other in a place where they never should be together, something changed. Maybe some people can call it "fate",

Comments

[droot]

What is this end!!? T__T
I can't believe you just stop there.. Ryo was waiting for Pi for so long.. and now.. now that he is here.. it's the end? xD And moreover he is responsible for Ryo's crash?! Aaah~

Well.. We learnt lot of things in this chapter.. who Kame's father is and what he wants.. why Kame is running and hiding from him..! ^^
But there's another strange scene with Pi now! xD I wonder what he is hiding.. why he is so mysterious..
Even if we learnt some things.. there is still plenty of mysteries in this fic! I love it! <3

[oroja]

So fast! Scary... ;)
And again, my evil laugh. lol. What you expected? I can't end it nice, I wouldn't be myself ;)
And yeah, I straightened some things up, but I'm trying to be like Agatha Christie xD But seriously, I hoped that it will be long mutlti-chapter, but damn, I'm afraid that I will end it soon. Maybe that story has outgrown me?
And what strange scene with Pi? Everything is normal... in my world ;)
♥

[droot]

xD
Yea it wouldn't be as exciting as it is if each chapter's end was nice.. but still..!! xD

Multi-chapter are more gripping because you can think about the story while waiting for the next chapter.. but it's also very frustrating.. and that's exactly how i am feeling right now! T_T
Ah~ I wanna come into your world! xD

[oroja]

Sorry for your frustration. I can write something else to get rid of it xD
And you are in my world! Every time when you read my stuff xD Or maybe don't be there? You see, I'm not normal ;)

[fullhouse_10]

First I promise I will not ask you questions ;)... even though I freaking want to but i know you will not answer me anyway!
No really, there is revelations and new questions at each chapter xd
(Who the hell is this "new guy"????)

I 'm so happy with this chapter because OMG, I LOVE RYOPI <3333
the akame was kind of cute too (I can't believe I 'm saying this *_*)
but the end... T______T SO EVIL!!!

Thanks!

[oroja]

I think that I should change my name on 'evil'. Everything would be so much easier... ;)
And you asked a question! Hehe, and sure I won't answer ;) Well I will, but not now xD
And yeah, Ryopi is love xD
Thanks for reading ♥

[snow_meow]

I wonder does Kame know about Pi's secret that is why he looks out for Pi.

[oroja]

You know, I didn't think about it yet, so I don't know. And I don't know if it's good that I'm saying it ;)
Thanks for reading ♥

[oroja]

Oh, glad you like it xd