Comments | oroja: [Fanfic] Distractions

oroja

[Fanfic] Distractions

Sep 20, 2009 23:56

Title: Distractions
Pairings: Ryopi, Tomapi
Genre: angst
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own those guys only in my imagination.
Summary: It's a story without any action. 2557 words of complicated feelings.

( you know that with him, you’re not really alone )

ryopi, one-shot, tomapi

Comments 10

mm_nani September 20 2009, 22:25:49 UTC

It is RyoPi and Tomapi

With 2557 words of complicated feelings

Im afraid to read this T__T

mm_nani September 20 2009, 22:42:13 UTC

I am in complete and utter confusionas to who you are

As in YOU the person

Because your stories they are....I don't know a little overwhelming.

It's not a bad thing but you know....Eh Im just failing in expressing myself.

I honestly thought Yamapi was with Toma at the cafe -____-

I went to the end of Ryo's and then realized.

I don't understand what I should feel happy that they ended up together or annoyd that he's the rebound guy...-___-

oroja September 21 2009, 06:31:32 UTC

I'm all of them, that's why it is like that.
And he was a rebound guy, he isn't like that anymore, so I think that's good ending for them.

mm_nani September 21 2009, 07:55:16 UTC

Eh

You scare me oroja-chan...

And -______________________- to Toma being the rebound guy

Thread 5

fullhouse_10 September 22 2009, 15:30:42 UTC

I was so... angsty lol
but I ilked it even though Ryopi are not together at the end^^

oroja September 22 2009, 18:51:00 UTC

It's this kind of story and Ryo was fitting here perfectly.
Thanks's for reading xD

droot September 28 2009, 08:49:11 UTC

Waw I'm commenting so late! T_T

Anyway.. I love that kind of story.. I mean.. the way you write.. without names and.. second person narrative.. and the fact that we know what the three of them are thinking..

But well.. I can't believe it ended with Tomapi xD
I don't understand why Ryo and Pi decided to part.. I was so so sure it was Toma and Pi at the café..
The end of Ryo's part is so sad.. well not only that part.. the whole story is sad.. but this last sentence particularly!

oroja October 17 2009, 09:22:43 UTC

Now I'm sorry for replaying so late xD
I know that I'm more Ryopi person, but not in this story ;) Anyway I can promise that I won't ever write something like that again.
Why they broke up? Because living without chances for act or without having what we want is pointless and sometimes it's better to give up. You know, to not get crazy ;)

nitroenka July 2 2010, 11:44:43 UTC

Wow, hard stuff. Very emotional and deep. Thx for sharing dear.