Comments | oroja: [Fanfic] Between lines

oroja

[Fanfic] Between lines

Jul 12, 2009 08:52

Title: Between lines
Pairings: Ryopi
Genre: friendship, angst, romance (if you have good eye)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own those guys only in my imagination.
Summary: All I have it’s my guitar, these cords and the truth

( ... when he felt strings under his fingers, all those words he never spoke, came back to him )

ryopi, one-shot

Comments 15

droot July 12 2009, 09:22:29 UTC

Hey no! What is it with that ending? xD
"- I can’t. Not with you. Ryo-chan… only not with you…" WHAT?!! T__T

But whatever.. I really love the way this fic is written because we don't know where it's leading us.. And in the end, I was totally shocked at them not being together! xD
I know you said you would change your ending.. but I was still hoping you wouldn't! xD

I love how it redraws their story from Ryo's point of view! From their meeting to the return of NewS.. and with Ryo's jealousy toward Pi's friends..
Yay yay, really great fic! I love it! ^_^ <3

oroja July 12 2009, 10:01:23 UTC

Hahaha xD
You reap what you sow so shut up ;) xD

And the ending is like the title, so I don't know if it's so much different from my others fic... but maybe it's just me? ;) I love when people have various points of view, so I guess I should shut up myself now xD

Anyway I think that it can end in two ways, or maybe in three, or four... It's not my job anymore to think about it xD

Thanks for reading <333

badbatazz July 12 2009, 15:29:30 UTC

why did pi reject ryo??? well at least they are frds....

oroja July 12 2009, 19:23:22 UTC

Yamapi didn't..... Yeah, ok, he rejected him but not exactly ;)

And maybe he did it because he thought that when his every move was observing he couldn't afford normal relationship and that half-ending maybe was better than crying. Or maybe I'm wrong? ;)

Thanks for reading <333

badbatazz July 13 2009, 01:52:59 UTC

well it is sad that yamapi know what ryo wants and cant give it to him and ryo just scared to say it out loud. at least he had a good nite sleep.

oroja July 13 2009, 08:44:44 UTC

Well it's true that he can't even if he want...
But there is that "promise that was up in the air" so really, they should just wait for right time.
And I don't think that Ryo is scared... he just didn't understand himself and that's why he never said a thing... or maybe he's a masochist ;)

snow_meow July 12 2009, 16:02:30 UTC

I don't know whether the ending is sad and tragic or one of peace for Ryo.

oroja July 12 2009, 19:25:49 UTC

I think that's neither of it xD
But well, there is many possibilities how their story can go (because even if I wrote it I still believe in them being together) xD

Thanks for reading <333

timedhappiness July 21 2009, 06:07:07 UTC

sigh T_T i came to read the other but then i found this one too ): you really understand their world TT_TT so heartbreaking!! my interpretation is that yamapi was afraid that he'd hurt ryo too... like when he asked ryo about toma and jin... what if ryo was "next" ? ): breaks my heart... gah!! i really loved the dialogue in this--the way it was presented, the way their characters spoke out in the few lines of dialogue that they had. especially the part when ryo talked about takki. this... went full circle until the very end with that depressingly "bittersweet" end... gah... it's very lifelike in that it did not have a full out answer. )*: but it saddens me for all parties.

i really like your writing!!

oroja July 21 2009, 06:35:09 UTC

You know what? I really have pricks of conscience... I have to write something funny... ;)
But in some way you have right with Pi and with his fear. To tell you the truth I never thought about it, when I wrote this I was focused on Ryo so it slipped my attention (what a writer... ). xD But I'm all for happy ending and I believe in them, that one day, when everything will be over, they would be together... At least if they still will want it xD
Thanks for reading <333

aoi_nya August 6 2009, 19:24:23 UTC

seriously, angst is totally up my alley.
i love your writing style. it's so personal and there's that tinge of humor.
"Bakanishi! Leave Ryo-chan alone. He can pick up your stupidity." - lol.

there really are plenty of unspoken words here between ryopi. but well, maybe being in that position is ryo's comfort zone. bittersweet it is ( :

oroja August 7 2009, 06:32:56 UTC

Ha! You're starting with fics? Good xD

Unspoken? That's like the tittle xD

You know, when I'm writing something, I never see the whole picture and then when I'm reading comments I'm sometimes surprised how others interpret it, but for the first time, with this fic, I know everything. But I really love that there can be so many thoughts, I always try to write in that way xD

And I'm glad you like it! I told you that's different from my drabbles, so it makes me happy that you read it! Thanks <333

aoi_nya August 9 2009, 20:07:24 UTC

i need my ryopin fix every time i get the chance. XDD

isn't it just interesting to hear how ur readers interpret your writing~
besides, i think it's not easy to write a good slice of life story... some that i've read before get a little draggy and routine.

oroja August 10 2009, 12:29:05 UTC

Well, basically people write romances and those writers are usually teenage fangirls so maybe that's why those stories you read were like that.
I was bored with those fics, I really was, I couldn't read what I like, so that's why I started with my writing xD