Wow, that was hot. I'd been wondering if you were having a dry spell with your writing, and then you suddenly show up with this masterpiece, proving me very, very wrong. In a good way! You did an amazing job with the build-up of their relationship, it felt very realistic! Kudos to you!
I swear to Heaven I melted from this. You did everything wonderfully. The slow build up, Sanji's confusion, Lucci's murderousness, Zoro's actions. All wonderful. Only complaint I have is there's no Chopper or Usopp. Sadness. But that's a minor complaint. Really well written stuff here. So good.
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And thanks for reading! <333 XD
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Wonderful job too. Always love your fics. Characterization,pace, writing altogether is amazing. ^________^
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