Comments | orphica: FIC: "Chris' Secret"

orphica

FIC: "Chris' Secret"

Jun 02, 2011 06:33

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fic: pinto, zachary quinto, rps, fic: nc-17, chris pine, fic, pinto, fic: rps

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rae1013 June 4 2011, 00:40:02 UTC

Neither watersports nor diapers are my kinks but you hammered home on the biggest kinks I have. The trust, honesty and affection between them are all just so freaking clear and perfect and Nnnnnnnnnggggh! They are so hot in this that I can't even articulate it correctly. *dies*

orphica June 4 2011, 22:41:15 UTC

*g* Glad you liked it, thanks!

acacia_123 June 4 2011, 01:07:43 UTC

love when partners show a shared caring and acceptance and love.
Great job

orphica June 4 2011, 22:40:23 UTC

Thank you!

therumjournals June 4 2011, 04:45:25 UTC

i love the mental aspect that you put into the kink - makes it easier to understand the appeal and then be all like "damn why is this so hot!"

But Chris wanted more, he wanted to fight for his orgasm, to struggle for it. - GUHHHH WHY IS THIS SO HOT?

this was really well done. will read again.

orphica June 4 2011, 22:39:53 UTC

Thank you for the compliments!! Glad you enjoyed.

annadraper June 4 2011, 21:54:23 UTC

this isn't my kink, but man i think you did an outstanding job with it. your characterization (in this and in your heels story) are just so on-point that it's such a heart-warming pleasure to "watch" your chris and zach explore chris' off-beat kinks. please don't hesitate to write more in these universes, if the inclination strikes you! :)

orphica June 4 2011, 22:39:02 UTC

Yeah, I kinda felt like it was the same story as Heels but with a different kink, but I liked the prompt, so there it is. I'm probably someday soon going to be writing a sequel to Heels because of those new Detail outtakes... just can't NOT do something with those!

annadraper June 19 2011, 01:36:50 UTC

oh it totally didn't "feel" like it was the exact same story, it was that good. :) as well, you definitely left it open enough with chris *just now* being able to consider more possibilities for expressing his kink, that you could take it anywhere. if that makes sense. /uber belated reply

norfolkdumpling June 12 2011, 11:00:33 UTC

Just catching up on Pornapalooza entries..

And hello there kink I didn't know I had! This was lovely - hot, sweet and just gorgeous. I love how accepting Zach was of Chris' embarrassment, and the spooning afterwards was just delicious.

orphica June 17 2011, 07:55:15 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment, glad you liked it!!