A Silver Farthing | One Shot

Jul 01, 2007 10:07

Title: A Silver Farthing
Author: eternitybreaks@orton_fics
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sergio Ramos and Fernando Torres
Warning: No. Warning.
Disclaimer: Not true. All fake.
Archive: Yes. Beautiful Games.
Summary: The prompts 'meal' and 'gift'
For: tasteslikeboys@footballslash07 OTP fic exchange

otp fic challenge )

fernando torres, sergio ramos

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pirlazza July 1 2007, 10:54:59 UTC
awwwww. I loved this so much (but the ending! ;_;) and I don't even like Sernando!

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eternitybreaks July 1 2007, 19:16:57 UTC
I'd have them all live happily ever after. I would too ♥

NEITHER DO I! LOL! But I wrote it nevertheless. Thanks for reading :D

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parallelkites July 1 2007, 11:19:16 UTC
Gahh. This was absurdly fabulous.

“For not laughing.”

“Why would I laugh at something that means a lot to you?”

That killed me completely. Thank you so much for doing this pairing justice. ♥

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eternitybreaks July 1 2007, 19:18:59 UTC
*sighs in relief*

It even got to the stage my friend was checking your fics, to see how you liked to write their personality. LOL. I mean I would have myself, but these guys I can never get into too. BUT! I did them justice ♥ that makes me happy!

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parallelkites July 3 2007, 07:17:24 UTC
LOL!

Oh dear. But you most definitely did them justice and I'm glad you did it. :D

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perfect__denial July 1 2007, 17:29:19 UTC
OMG, you wrote Sernando *_______________* I'll read it right now. Just wanted to say that I'm so happy about it! LOL. *hugs*

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eternitybreaks July 1 2007, 19:19:49 UTC
LMAO!

I DID! It was hard cause I don't like this pairing But I did it. ♥ I hope you like it!

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perfect__denial July 2 2007, 03:15:20 UTC
Oh dear... this is fantastic. I loved it.
Saving to memories, now! <333333333333333333

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eternitybreaks July 2 2007, 04:06:19 UTC
♥ YAY! Thanks hon!

ICON LOVE!

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skylineeee July 1 2007, 22:10:10 UTC
aw this was really good!

It was like drinking toilet water and watching your grandmother have sex all rolled into one

that line made me laugh out loud!

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eternitybreaks July 1 2007, 23:48:27 UTC
LOL, I can't help myself sometimes.

Thanks for reading ♥

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txorakeriak July 2 2007, 17:05:57 UTC
Fabulous. I'm not really into this pairing (not that I have anything against it, I'm just indifferent), and before I read it, I wondered if I would picture Fernando Gago instead of Fernando Torres, because I usually read/write Sergio with Gago. Well, I was surprised to realize that I didn't! Not a single time. For that, I must compliment you, and also for having written a wonderful and compelling fic. The smut was hot and steamy and brilliant and so them, and the ending was sad and still lovely. I love old coins, too, so I had to smile when Fernando got one from Sergio. ♥ Of course it's sad to see they decided to break it off, but they're still friends, and I think that's what matters. :)

*adds to memories*

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eternitybreaks July 6 2007, 00:35:45 UTC
Thank you so much. I don't read this pairing myself because I have a somewhat deep hatred for Sergio...so it was hard and I was slowly going mad with it, because I wanted to do a good job. So thank you for your comment it makes writing hard stories worth it ♥

I love collecting coins/notes so I thought I'd throw that in. Plus Fernando can buy himself anything, so why not something he "likes" (Well in the fic anyway).

I just googled Fernando Gago and he's a year older than me. Pretty he is, I don't think I've seen a lot of fic with him init?

Anyway thanks again, it makes me all happy that you're putting my one and only Sergio/Fernando fic into your memories ♥

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txorakeriak July 8 2007, 16:27:09 UTC
Whatwhat? You don't like Sergio? OMG. I didn't think that was possible. But hey, you can't like everyone. :) Oh, and I SO know what it's like to write about people you don't like too much. I had to write three (or four, I don't remember) fics about Clemens Fritz and I was almost going mad because I didn't want to show that I don't like him too much. *sends sympathies*

You really did an awesome job. :)

Plus Fernando can buy himself anything, so why not something he "likes"
And something, that's special, too! I mean, coins (especially true silver farthings) aren't everyday gifts. :)

Oh, I'm almost obsessed about Gago. He's damn addictive, and so pretty. Plus, he looks different in every pic. I've found pics in which he totally looks like Owen Hargreaves, and then, there are pics in which he looks like Martín Demichelis. And then, there are other pics. I find that fascinating. (And he practically goes with anyone, which is very convenient, too. XD) I'd recommend you likefire_fics, but you said you don't like Sergio ( ... )

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eternitybreaks July 8 2007, 16:43:52 UTC
LOL.

*feels ashamed* I'm sorry. You're right you can't like everyone. He's just one of those people that rubs me the wrong way. I have a deep hatred for his hair too.

Clemens Fritz Ah yes, I also have a deep hatred for all German teams and the National Team. I don't think I could ever write any of the boys. Even though I like Ballack, I won't ever write him. It is painful to write pairings you don't like. I mean I like Fernando, but I have never had the urge to write about him.

Thank you *hugs* Yeah. I was thinking what kind of coin, and did some research and though the Silver Farthing was both historically great.

HOLY CRAP He does look like Owen Hargreaves...wow! That's uncanny. LOL. I'm going to have to check a few fics of him now ( ... )

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