Manchester United Chronicles Part 4 (...To Say Sorry)

[eternitybreaks]

Title: Manchester United Chronicles (Part 4)
Sub Title: ...To Say Sorry
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Comments

[bergusia]

OMG, this is brilliant. Really brilliant. I was actually kinda waiting for a sequel to the previous three parts and I almost forgot all about it. But I totally enjoyed reading it (and the previous parts again to get back into the story).

The conversation between John and Ryan is really amazing (and beautifully written). Especially this line Ryan, all you had to say you were sorry and that’s it.. It's simple but it carries so much emotion in it. And the portrait of Gary is really fab - it's kinda the way I imagine him to be in real life. ;-)

Thanks for sharing with us.

[eternitybreaks]

I know, I'm sorry. I was having a hard time and then I finally got something I liked. I'm really glad you liked it ♥

The conversation between John and Ryan is really amazing (and beautifully written)

Yay! Thank you. I was a bit wary of it, but I'm glad it worked out. Thanks for the great comment :D

[bergusia]

There's no need to apologize. The fact that it took you a while made me enjoy it even more. So that's totally fine with me. XD *hugs*

[eternitybreaks]

*hugs back*

Thank you!