Ouw... For not liking the Sergio, yus yus. I like the guilt and the intensity. Gago is so obviously inexperienced and naive and Sergio is taking advantage of him but ashamed for doing so? He looks away.
Well when I wrote this in my head it was Fernando feeling awkward and guilty for being at the party with his girlfriend. Sergio feels like Fernando is "two-timing" him for being their with g/f, so stares and then stares some more.
LOL, I thought I wrote him very boyish in the first one? And secretly smart? But yea, I've grown up watching "brooding" characters on TV. I can't help myself.
Oh wow. That was intense. I could feel Sergio's gaze on me as I was reading that. And Gago staring back... Mmmmmmmh. So much subtext. I love it. And you dedicated this to me? OMG! *glomps* Thank you so much!!! I really don't know what to say! *pets the precious drabble* ♥
You know how I feel about drabbles, but they're so immensely satisfying once they're done. :D I think I can get used to writing drabbles on a regular basis. footie_100 really helps. :)
And I'm still speechless about the dedication. ♥ That's so kind of you!
Wow!!! So angsty! I haven't understood what Fernando did wrong... is it not mentioned (no hints) or did I miss something important as usual?%)))) Thanks anyway, I like the drabble very much! I've got a few ideas but I'm not sure I'm right%)
Technically he didn't do anything wrong, the premise lies within the possibility of two footballers falling in love, but because they are in such a homophobic profession they can't come out, so to speak. So in this story Sergio is upset because Fernando has chosen his girlfriend and the life of a 'straight' man over him. But at the same time he understands why. The fact simply lies with, love makes you crazy.
It's between the lines kind of thing (and I apologise for the late reply)
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Now I'm glad I did. Great drabble, my dear *smiles*
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This is goosebumps good. :D
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Well when I wrote this in my head it was Fernando feeling awkward and guilty for being at the party with his girlfriend. Sergio feels like Fernando is "two-timing" him for being their with g/f, so stares and then stares some more.
Hee.
Thank you!
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You write Sergio very intense-like. In both of your fics, you characterize him as very dark ("dark"). More-so than other people.
Welcome! ILU!
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LOL, I thought I wrote him very boyish in the first one? And secretly smart? But yea, I've grown up watching "brooding" characters on TV. I can't help myself.
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I'm glad you liked it, my first drabble (well sort off, I can never write anything exactly 100 - but it's cool). So Yay! And yes dedicated to you ♥
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And I'm still speechless about the dedication. ♥ That's so kind of you!
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LOL. Tis ok, you inspired me ♥
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Thanks anyway, I like the drabble very much! I've got a few ideas but I'm not sure I'm right%)
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It's between the lines kind of thing (and I apologise for the late reply)
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