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Last Call (standalone)

Aug 07, 2007 17:08

Title: Last Call (standalone)
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david beckham, iker casillas, football, fic, last call

Comments 21

bergusia August 7 2007, 17:35:51 UTC

What a prick.

No, seriously, beautifully written. And really heartbreaking. I seriously feel for Iker...

"This is a battle we can’t win and all battles have casualties Iker. I just made you the casualty." Perfect. *sighs*

eternitybreaks August 8 2007, 17:17:13 UTC

But...but he had to make a decision. No I do get your point ;)

Thank you for reading :D

pippopippo August 7 2007, 18:56:27 UTC

Oh, wonderful. Heartbreaking, but absolutely wonderful. ♥

eternitybreaks August 8 2007, 17:16:27 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment ♥

rrr_nightingale August 7 2007, 19:17:35 UTC

I really like it, thank you. David's character is a bit unusual for me, but it's definetely an interesting point of view.

eternitybreaks August 8 2007, 17:14:48 UTC

I like to shake things around. Gets boring otherwise. Thanks for reading :)

jumping_down August 7 2007, 19:26:32 UTC

I love your Iker. I hate arrogant SOB Becks. >.<

Lovely story, dear.

eternitybreaks August 8 2007, 17:15:50 UTC

Aw! I'm glad you like my Iker. Initially my thought wasn't to make David the mean one here. But alas I guess it came off that way ;)

Thank you ♥

rebelstrike21 August 8 2007, 01:22:32 UTC

*COUGH*CHEAPMOTELSEX*

ILU ♥

eternitybreaks August 8 2007, 17:13:05 UTC

DON'TTEMPTME!

♥ ILU2

rebelstrike21 August 8 2007, 18:14:53 UTC

AHAHAHAHA.

IAMSUCHABADINFLUENCE.

*GRINS*

eternitybreaks August 8 2007, 19:35:51 UTC

SQUEE!

I LOVE YOUR BAD INFLUENCES!

♥