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sophiamoon June 22 2008, 23:14:24 UTC
Not the kind of fic you see everyday in footy slash.
It's not "nice" as in: "what a nice fic" but it has a strong imagery and it's them in a different manner.

Well done!

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eternitybreaks June 23 2008, 01:09:36 UTC
Thank you so much for the comment ♥ I was reading a heavily dominated BDSM novel, and it just inspired me to try a hand at my own. I'm glad the imagery came off well.

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sophiamoon June 23 2008, 16:05:11 UTC
I'm not a visual reader (or writer) at all, but with your discriptions I can imagine readers who are, will have no trouble "seeing" what's happening.

You planning on writing more footy slash?

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eternitybreaks June 24 2008, 01:08:51 UTC
♥ I'm glad you did, because that was what I was aiming for.

I don't know. I have some series that I need to finish, but I'm finding that reading/writing footie slash wasn't as fun as it was two years ago. I will write some here and there, but not as much as I did before.

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eternitybreaks June 23 2008, 01:08:19 UTC
♥!

thank you ma' dear.

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oh_so_blase June 22 2008, 23:48:13 UTC
I like this. I like the fact that your Xabi and Stevie are different, very different, from other fics. I like the imagery. I like the fact that you haven't written in quite a while and you still got it.

i hope to see more of your writting soon ::coughcoughJesse/Adamfic::coughcough::

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eternitybreaks June 23 2008, 01:07:55 UTC
I think its been six months since I wrote a football fic :/ but your comment was made of lovely. Thank you so much ♥!

::coughcoughJesse/Adamfic::coughcough::

I've been racking my brain trying to figure out who these two are. But I don't know? Help :(

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oh_so_blase June 23 2008, 01:19:28 UTC
i'm glad it made you happy. =]

I'm pretty sure I'm not mistaken here, but, were you not co-writing a fic that was loosely based on Lost? it was a Brand New/Taking Back Sunday fic. In where John was with Jesse and he dies on the plane crash, his sister is still alive. They land on the island [Adam was John's ex, he was now with Jesse] and Adam couldn't here and Jesse was hurt...
uhm...does it ring a bell?

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eternitybreaks June 23 2008, 11:46:20 UTC


No, that's not me -g- I do write bandom fics (rarely now) but have never written Brand New/Taking Back Sunday one. I don't even know who they are, lol.

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iamyourmind June 23 2008, 01:19:32 UTC
♥ Wow. It's different and has a very strong 'Guh' factor :) Good job!

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eternitybreaks June 24 2008, 01:10:11 UTC
Thanks so much ♥!

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parallelkites June 23 2008, 03:35:55 UTC
not my type of fic, but it was good.

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eternitybreaks June 24 2008, 01:09:51 UTC
Appreciated :D

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