Comments | orton_fics: Bang! (Part 1)

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Feb 08, 2013 00:15

Title: Bang! (1/?)
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Comments 28

rebelstrike21 February 8 2013, 09:18:26 UTC

I'M NOT EVEN HALF WAY AND SKDJFKSDFLJ GAH DAVID :(

eternitybreaks February 8 2013, 13:46:06 UTC

SOB SOB SOB SOB SOB!

rebelstrike21 February 8 2013, 09:23:46 UTC

God, I love your descriptions of Iker's eyes.

eternitybreaks February 8 2013, 13:45:52 UTC

They'll start twinkling when they fall in love, lol.

rebelstrike21 February 8 2013, 09:25:30 UTC

Also, I love your backstory for Iker going into the police force.

eternitybreaks February 8 2013, 13:45:34 UTC

Not too cheesy? Figured I'd give him some depth about him as a person; he loved his dad so it made sense to me anyway ;)

rebelstrike21 February 8 2013, 09:28:17 UTC

I kinda also really like the fact that Iker and David are the only people in this fic that are footballers.

eternitybreaks February 8 2013, 13:44:34 UTC

Yes. I used original characters as opposed to other players. It's AU so I preferred it was just Iker/David in it ;)

rebelstrike21 February 8 2013, 09:28:36 UTC

THIS IS SO GOOD SKDJFLSKDJFLKSJDLFKJSLDKF. BUT DAVID :(((((((((((

eternitybreaks February 8 2013, 13:43:34 UTC

HE'S ALL SAD!FACE RIGHT NOW ~ I WISH DIDN'T DO IT NOW :(