Bang! (2/?)

[eternitybreaks]

The quick rapid knocks on the door pushed David to consciousness. He felt his back twinge in agony as he rolled to his side. He groaned as he stood up, his body shaking in exhaustion as he made his way to the door. David pulled the door open and squinted at the nice officer that seemed like he was helping rather than judging.

“Hi,” croaked David.

Comments

[wolkenfuehlen]

SHIT IS GETTING REAL! o_O

I'm afraid this is just gonna get more and more traumatizing for poor David... ♥

[eternitybreaks]

YOU ARE RIGHT!

David will be traumatised for a bit more; but eventually Iker will make it better ;)

[jungle_moon]

Hi! First time commenting here!

So glad someone finally decided to write Iker/Becks again! YAY!!

After reading this 2nd chapter... my first thought is... WOW! Iker is straight? and he likes this Rova woman who is apparently so beautiful she made Iker's heart beating faster on the first meeting! I mean...how could Becks even compete with that?!

(yes, silly question isn't it? no one can compare and compete to beautiful Becks! even the straight ones couldn't resist him eventually. LOL! ;p)

Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter! ;D

[eternitybreaks]

Hello and welcome :)

Ha, well my friend wanted someone to write her this prompt and its ended up being a whole episode.

Iker...is bisexual but tends to lean towards women more. I'm pretty sure I haven't commented on his sexuality yet in the story, but just a heads up on that front. Rova in my head basically looks like a super model and thus is why Iker is all OMG over her physically. I think I wanted to drum the point on how attractive she is, but I'm also going to go into more detail about Iker when the investigation part comes to a close.

I didn't make this clear in the fic (because it wasn't suppose to be this "big") but David is in his early twenties in this fic. Probably 23 whilst Iker is 31. David is also a victim in a murder investigation so Iker isn't looking at him in anyway physical (that'd be gross). Right now all Iker sees is a broken down kid an he's trying to help him. I don't know how long this fic is going to be - but I do promise David x Iker endgame ;)

Thanks for commenting!

[jungle_moon]

Thank you for the explanation!

Now I can't wait to know more!

(^_^)

[eternitybreaks]

A better writer would have made sure to make that clear, lol.

I'll be posting the next chapter on Monday ;)

[elisa88]

yay, more fic =) and more investigation!!
I liked the back flashes Becks had, and hopefully now that Iker has found new information it will lead to finding who murdered him (and why!? I mean he was loved by everyone - maybe some guy couldn't find his way to Martin's pants so they decided no one ever could) *le sigh.
I don't like Iker checking out some woman (even if she's all super model like), he belongs to my david - he just doesn't know that yet, but we will soon enlighten him and show him how much hotter becks is XD
-and this Martin kid truly sounds like a sweetheart, the way he was with David was so nice and kind of adorable. Poor Dave.

more.. soon, please?? pretty please?? with brownies on top? ^_^

[eternitybreaks]

You shall find out soon, tbh I kept changing my mind about the Martin endgame but I didn't want to make it too obvious either. Martin was a good kid and I'm sad I killed him :(

Haha. I think we need to remember that Iker sees David as a victim and he's seven years younger than him (in this fic); so he isn't too into David. He shall be though ;)

In my head Martin is a complex character, I'll probably delve into his personality more when David thinks about him.

I'll be posting c3 on Monday (4th March) so I hope that's ok?

Thanks for commenting.