Inception - Atom to Atom (Feel It On Me Love) (4/4)

[osaki_nana_707]

Title: Atom to Atom (Feel It On Me Love) (4/4

Comments

[atira7]

...basically I look just like my icon.

This was so great, really ♥

Also, your Beauty and the Beast line made me flail around in a very silly way.

[vock]

I feel like shit for saying this but I really enjoy your depiction of gore and violence. It's not exactly graphic, but it's very intense and vivid all the same.

And yes please CODA. :D

[osaki_nana_707]

Don't feel like shit! I'm glad you enjoy it now who sounds messed up? because I always worry that it sounds stilted or forced.

[fatal_scribbles]

This was a really great, well developed fic. I'm not really in the Inception fandom- I don't actively search for fic, but I loved the film though. I stumbled across this when looking for mpreg fics in another fandom with actual canon werewolves and thought I'd give it a shot because I've read Eames/Arthur before and liked it. Anyway, I liked the build up and the mythology you created, the action scenes could have been a bit more detailed for me but overall I thoroughly enjoyed reading about this little au world. And Baby Jude was too cute! \o/

[osaki_nana_707]

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it because I was totally in unknown waters when I wrote this. It was more of an experiment to see which boundaries of mine I could push, so I'm glad I managed to pull it off so that you could enjoy it.

Yeah, I agree with you about the action scenes. This was originally written as commentfic so I was limited in space at first, but I still need to work on writing them better. :p

[franny93]

aww that was such a great story (and cute in the end) <3 I enjoyed this so much!!!