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oscared3

You Can Sleep

Dec 13, 2009 23:14

Title: You Can Sleep
Rating: G
Characters: Sam, Dean (Gen)
Summary: "You see the way he looks at you, concern and fear barely veiled behind thin jokes and humorless teasing. You can’t see the humor in anything right now. You’re too far gone." A short one shot written for the prompt below. I roughed up Dean a bit too, because it's more fun that ( Read more... )

limp!sam, fic, limp!dean

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leavingslowly December 14 2009, 04:50:29 UTC

Yay, I was so happy to see something from you pop up on my flist! It's been awhile since I read a good old-fashioned, well-written h/c supernatural fic!

P.S. Any chance you want to migrate to White Collar with me and write glorious fiction?

oscared3 December 14 2009, 15:05:11 UTC

Aw, thank you!

I can't say I'm familiar with White Collar. I'll have to go familiarize myself, won't I? Thanks for the offer!

leavingslowly December 15 2009, 00:05:59 UTC

White Collar is my new obsession. You can watch the full episodes on USA's website.

way late maxegirl1313 January 10 2010, 16:33:11 UTC

Hi, fellow white collar fan. Might you be able to point me in the direction of some good communities please?

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debbiel66 December 14 2009, 05:35:56 UTC

I really, really enjoyed this. The second person POV worked for me, and I really enjoyed the glimpses of Dean from Sam's disordered perspective. Classic h/c and well written too... couldn't ask for more than that. Thank you.

oscared3 December 14 2009, 15:07:21 UTC

The second person POV worked for me

Oh, good. I thought it might be something only my twisted mind could comprehend.

Thanks so much for the kind review. It meant a lot :)

wave_obscura December 14 2009, 18:16:42 UTC

This was beautiful. Second person is so tricky, and you pulled it off expertly. It really works well. And the brotherly love is PALPABLE. It's fic like this that reminds me why I love the show so much.

I know you're busy but please, please write much more fic. I'd love to see a multi-chapter from you.

oscared3 December 14 2009, 23:27:17 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you felt I pulled it off. Like you said, it's tricky...

I'd love to see a multi-chapter from you.

Working on it. But I only post once a story is completed, so it's going to be a little while yet. The good news is I usually post fic all at once -- in its entirety -- so once it's up, all of it is up. It will be longer than anything else I've written thus far, though.

wave_obscura December 14 2009, 23:43:35 UTC

YAY! I don't suppose you'd tell me what it's about?

oscared3 December 14 2009, 23:45:26 UTC

Of course. In a PM, though. Because I don't want to be held accountable by too many if I screw up my own storyline :)

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randomfangirl29 December 14 2009, 19:57:31 UTC

Thanks for this, it was awesome. Sorry I'm so slow to read it, I've been away from my computer for awhile.

oscared3 December 14 2009, 23:28:50 UTC

You're welcome. I'm glad you weren't disappointed.

And I only posted it last night, so you weren't slow to read at all :)

breakharmony December 15 2009, 00:02:04 UTC

(Hi! Lurker here...)

So, I'm supposed to be studying for exams. That just made me want to forget about studying and sleep for a month. I loved it! Good style too, especially with the way you rocked second person! :)

oscared3 December 15 2009, 00:05:47 UTC

Hey, lurkers are always welcomed! I lurk a fair bit myself.

So glad you enjoyed it. You're reading and I'm writing while we both should be studying... I justify it to myself by saying it's a short fic ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting.