Favorite line: “Don't fucking touch me!” Sam somehow growls. Except he's not mad, Dean knows. He's panicking.
Yay! The entire thing was based on that one line. It was the very first thing I wrote down.
And your Dean is so amazing, I just may make a request that you write him with some kind of sickness down the road. You'd kick ass on it.
I can definitely do that. Dean needs a good ass kicking. He's getting off way too easy. Send me a note with a prompt, and I'll likely write you something completely unrelated (poor Wave), but you never know, maybe it'll be slightly relevant :)
It's exactly what I like best when I just want to retreat into a story - brothers being solicitous without being schmoopy, visceral descriptions with pain and suffering and medical credibility.
Hehe. Yeah, there is basically just a whole lot of wallowing going on at this journal. I'd say I'm going to lighten the mood with some comedy or something, that would be a lie because I have no intention of doing that anytime soon.
If their trauma is your happy place, then I think you're going to be happy here :)
I really enjoyed this. It was well-written and realistic and you've got great characterization. I adored the bit at the end with Sam telling Dean to get some sleep. They're such good brothers. Thanks so much for sharing this!
Thank you so much for reviewing this! And I appreciate the comment on characterization. Sometimes, it's easy to get swept away in what we want/believe and ignore canon. I am glad they came across as real, and then good brothers on top of that.
I love this. Sam's panic and distress are palpable as is Dean's as he tries to figure out how to help him. I'm going to be here reading fic all night. ♥
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Yay! The entire thing was based on that one line. It was the very first thing I wrote down.
And your Dean is so amazing, I just may make a request that you write him with some kind of sickness down the road. You'd kick ass on it.
I can definitely do that. Dean needs a good ass kicking. He's getting off way too easy. Send me a note with a prompt, and I'll likely write you something completely unrelated (poor Wave), but you never know, maybe it'll be slightly relevant :)
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It's exactly what I like best when I just want to retreat into a story - brothers being solicitous without being schmoopy, visceral descriptions with pain and suffering and medical credibility.
Their trauma is my happy place!
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If their trauma is your happy place, then I think you're going to be happy here :)
Thanks for the sweet comment!
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And, yes, of course -- friend away!
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