Comments | osculatorium: Bury Me Deep

spurious in osculatorium

Bury Me Deep

Mar 18, 2006 12:52

Title: Bury Me Deep
Character: Theodore Nott
Prompt: the ballroom at midnight
Rating: pg-13
Word Count: 499
Author's Notes: so much thanks to sioniann, fiere, ohmygiddyaunt, & prurient_badger for beating this fic into shape. Also, special ♥ to prurient_badger for thinking of a title.
Warning: character death

( Bury Me Deep (Theodore) )

7spells, theodore, harry potter

Comments 23

notions March 18 2006, 13:29:32 UTC

(I am ridiculously awful at feedback.) This is good! And sad and creepy but well written. The bit with talking to his soup spoon stood out too. andddd yeah. creepy.

spurious March 18 2006, 13:49:03 UTC

::beam:: I was trying for creepy, yeees.
though I really didn't know he was going to kill himself when I started! It just sort of happened. :\

your hidey icon is v. nice!

notions March 18 2006, 13:53:38 UTC

well you succeeded! and I love how writing (drawing too!) can take you places you didn't foresee. If that makes sense.

and thank you! it is new. I like yours too. :))

spurious March 18 2006, 13:57:25 UTC

hehe yes it does! I wrote this in the car because I saw a face in the clouds and suddenly I thought "omg theodore!"

yay for new icons!

ohmygiddyaunt March 19 2006, 16:43:57 UTC

Oh, how I lurve your Theodore. This fic is all sorts of amazing, slightly creepy, mad love. ♥ :D

spurious March 19 2006, 16:47:50 UTC

♥♥♥

mondayagain March 19 2006, 18:56:19 UTC

you are too brilliant and i love you so much for writing this because omg, the self-burial is so symbolic and beautiful and CRAZY.

It was so obvious. The ground was safe.

and

choosing sides killing killing Muggles Mudbloods Gryffindors my mother

were so dark and beautiful. ♥

spurious March 19 2006, 20:04:20 UTC

♥♥♥!

I really didn't intend for him to bury himself alive! Promise! hehehe.

(The comment has been removed)

spurious March 20 2006, 10:05:43 UTC

he is so fun to play with!

born_to_run March 20 2006, 13:23:54 UTC

asdflk;

How did you get so amazing?
I also really adore your Theodore.

And I love how he's getting away from "eyes" and the repetition of the word "eyes", and how just getting away from the eyes makes everything better and asdlkjf... I don't even know what to say...

This part: "choosing sides killing killing Muggles Mudbloods Gryffindors my mother," his voice broke, fingertips starting to bleed, and he continued speaking in a hoarse whisper: "everyone everyone dying killing hurting me looking at me make it stop stop stop STOP" That's beautiful.
Also, "bunny bunny bunny bunny STOP!" I don't know why that reminded me of that, but it did, sorta. :)

It's weird because I always wait a few days after I notice you've posted something to read it and then I love it and I get mad at myself for waiting so long. You'd think I'd learn.

spurious March 20 2006, 13:34:17 UTC

eeee, this comment = ♥

also, I sort of thought about bunny bunny bunny STOP when I was writing that. hehehe.