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Screaming it from the Rooftops (Shuuji/Akira)

Mar 07, 2007 16:23

title: Screaming it from the Rooftops
fandom: Nobuta Wo Produce
pairing: Shuuji/Akira
words: 1135
rating: PG-13
summary: Shuuji and Akira go to the roof. Set a little while after the end of the series.
notes: From the prompt "roofsmexing", from intoxikatie. Also thanks to her for prodding me to write this and assuring me it didn't suck. ♥ And thanks to sirenicconsort for ( Read more... )

shuuji/akira, nobuta wo produce

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lynnmonster March 8 2007, 01:40:36 UTC

::claws at computer screen::

This was awesome! I loved it!

I'm often hesitant of more-than-PG Nobuta fic, just because I fear that some of the qualities I loved about the show might be lost in the quest for hotness. But no such worries here! This was lovely and their personalities and interactions read really true to me.

spurious March 8 2007, 02:00:20 UTC

OH THANK GOD. That's what I was really, really worried about while I was writing this, and why I made a conscious effort to keep things less porny than is my usual inclination, so I'm so glad it worked for you!

partaken March 8 2007, 02:21:42 UTC

Oh my god I love this so much. I wish more people wrote Nobuta fic :(

spurious March 8 2007, 03:14:39 UTC

:((( I was so nervous writing this! Maybe other people are nervous too.

partaken March 8 2007, 03:20:35 UTC

:(( I know. I have this long Nobuta fic just lying in my notebook...I really shouldn't say anything.

spurious March 8 2007, 03:22:39 UTC

Whaaaaaaat. I need this.

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spurious March 8 2007, 03:21:20 UTC

:D!!! I am so glad!! :) Thank you.

silverrangel March 8 2007, 03:58:40 UTC

"Shuu~ji-kun! Let's do that all the time."

BWAHAHA. Ohmigosh. I loved this. How Shuuji confessed expecting an outright EXPLOSION of disgust and instead gets a kiss. How Akira is suddenly just, 'Oh. I guess I like Shuuji. KONKON!"

ajda;lklkj;fda this was so sweet and cute, I loved it. ♥

spurious March 8 2007, 05:42:40 UTC

:D :D Thank you! I was really unsure about this so I'm glad people like it.

danbi March 8 2007, 04:51:46 UTC

Oh Laura. There's something in your writing that feels like...simple and honest. You know? Or...more like...bare? Is how I'd describe it. It's a quality I really like!

Shuuji responds without thinking: "I couldn't care less about girls."

"Akira SHOCK!" He makes his face look appropriately shocked.

AHAHAHAH, this made me laugh so hard. :D

Although sometimes it seems like Akira's a little slow on the uptake, he picks up the art of frotting against a wall very quickly, and Shuuji smiles slightly, gripping Akira's shoulders to get himself a bit more leverage.

I like these sorts of lines, that give you part of the character without over-elaborating. It's vivid that way.

This was nice! I liked. :)

spurious March 8 2007, 05:49:27 UTC

*____* omg this review made me so happy. ♥♥♥