Biht

[koori_no_sakura]

Hello, minna-san, I just joined this community (OshiGaku is LOVE) and decided to post a fic ^^ I apologize if there are any mistakes, English is not my first language. If you find anything, just tell me and I'll correct it.
Title: Biht
Genre: Angst
Pairing: One-sided Gakuto/Yuushi
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of tennis and especially

Comments

[notanotherexit]

It breaks my heart to see the two of them separated. We all know they have to grow up and become something, but I always hope it's something together. The writing itself is fairly decent. A few errors, I'll point out two later. I enjoyed the stream of conscious style you implemented, and also believe the lives you made for them, even if it does make me sad

[koori_no_sakura]

Thank you for your comment and for pointing out my errors! I can't believe I made such stupid mistakes! >.<

I wanted to make Gakuto more mature than how he's usually portrayed - in this story he's thirty, a famous tennis player who is in love with a married man. I know, I love the whining Gakuto and I believe he will be a brat all his life, but his bratty self just didn't work for me here. In my mind he protested, whined and acted immature when Yuushi announced the engagement. But later he understood that he couldn't do anything about the situation. But I know what you want to say.

Again, thank you for reading this story! I'm glad you liked it even if there were some mistakes!