Comments | osmalic: (SPN Fic) "If You're Lucky"

osmalic

(SPN Fic) "If You're Lucky"

Dec 26, 2013 13:59

If You're Lucky
Sam/Dean
3800~ words, NC-17, blowjobs
It's a bunker!fic with curtain!fic, a dash of established relationships, oblivious!boys, first time, clothes sharing.
For broompeople in spn_j2_xmas.

( Being friends-with-benefits with your brother is one thing. Falling in love with your brother? That's a whole Jerry Springer episode. )

supernatural, my geek let me show it to you, sam/dean

Comments 17

broompeople December 26 2013, 07:25:12 UTC

Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I was about to go to bed when I saw this, and what a wonderful end to my Christmas ♥

This was truly fantastic. I loved every minute of it, from Sam trying to help injured Dean with his morning routine (the image of Dean having ransacked his room while attempting to get ready on his own is priceless), to the cooking lessons (complete with Dean standing a little closer than necessary), to the spot-on brotherly banter throughout. I especially enjoyed how comfortable and easy their relationship came across--how they sort of slid from one checkpoint to the next and while Sam knew they'd have to talk about what was going on between them at some point, he didn't press the matter. I thought it was a fitting.

Thank you again for the fantastic read. :)

osmalic December 29 2013, 06:46:36 UTC

I am so glad you managed to read it as part of your Christmas day! I was worried about it being too schmoopy that there were times even I was cringing so it had to go through rewrites. I really loved your prompts were interesting plus your likes were also my likes. Sam is so fun to write! :D I think Dean is getting there, they just need to be ready to talk about it seriously.

I hope you had a great Christmas season!

spnjaredjensen December 26 2013, 09:36:13 UTC

Oh my god this was so sweet and the hurt!dean was delicious! Sam's taking care of his brother, Dean's controlling of the kitchen/cooking, and the flickers of their love really made me elated! *screamingscreaming* And the library kinky blowjobs! YES! No touching the books lol.

Wonderful fic!

osmalic December 29 2013, 11:18:34 UTC

*lol* Sam had to be a nerd there somewhere, but he's a kinky nerd so they all win. Yay! So glad you liked it, I had fun writing it, especially the cooking!Dean part. :D

morrezela December 26 2013, 14:28:57 UTC

That was so awesome. I love how Dean decided that Sam needed to learn how to cook, and then Sam decided that Dean needed to, uh, relax ;)

osmalic December 30 2013, 16:50:52 UTC

Heehee, thank you, I love writing Sam relaxing for a change while Dean spazzes. Glad you liked it!

firesign10 December 27 2013, 04:10:25 UTC

aw jeez, I just loved this!!! Beautifully done!!!

osmalic December 30 2013, 16:51:30 UTC

Whee!! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I had a great time writing it, it was so much fun. <3

sandycub December 30 2013, 21:38:14 UTC

Loved this!

osmalic January 3 2014, 17:35:36 UTC

I'm so glad you do. Thank you! :D