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Five times John and Elizabeth shared a bed (NC-17)

Jul 05, 2010 22:57

Title: Five times John and Elizabeth shared a bed
Prompt: Five times John and Elizabeth shared a bed
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5,550
Betas: aleynarose
Spoiler: None

( Five times John and Elizabeth shared a bed )

rating: nc17, pairing: john/elizabeth, author: muses_mistress

Comments 13

krisrussel July 6 2010, 10:59:40 UTC

Awesome story. When I saw you picked this prompt, I couldn't wait to see what you'd do with it and it really did not disappointed ;^)
Great job!!

anuna_81 July 6 2010, 15:48:55 UTC

That was FAN - TAS - TIC. I loved it! I loved that you let it build up slowly, until they were both certain they wanted it. Vivid descriptions and very captive style of telling, and an awesome, happy - inducing, hot fic.

muses_mistress July 6 2010, 17:00:01 UTC

:D Thanks - I think that's the best feedback I've ever had!

southernred2 July 6 2010, 17:07:28 UTC

Just fantastic. And you nailed both characters so very well.

muses_mistress July 6 2010, 17:11:03 UTC

:D Thanks.

ankareeda July 7 2010, 00:26:42 UTC

That was absolutely fantastic! Awesome work, great writing style.

"Well," he said, continuing their conversation and ignoring Rodney's mutterings. "If I was, I wouldn't have invited Larry, Curly and Mo."

*LOL*

"Of all the times we've had to share a bed, name one that has ended professionally."

*giggles*

vickysg1 July 7 2010, 09:06:39 UTC

That was a lovely story, and a hot one too! Great use of this prompt!