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TANTALIZING TWELVE: PRILLALAR FOR SHIKANASHI KK!

Apr 07, 2010 14:04

Title: How Do You Get Down From An Elephant?
Author: prillalar / Halrloprillalar
Recipient: shikanashi_kk
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Atobe/Momo
Disclaimer: My Precioussssss! Not mine.
Word count: 6300 words
Summary: Dating is a game and Momo is definitely going to win.

Notes: kestrelsan, you're the best beta of all time. shikanashi_kk, I hope you have as much fun reading this as I had writing it ( Read more... )

prillalar, seigaku, hyoutei

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hamburgerjack April 7 2010, 18:05:53 UTC

Ah, I really enjoyed reading this. I just meant to look it over for html stuff before posting, but I wound up reading the whole thing before hand! XD Haw, cheating.

It's so effortless and wonderful, thank you. I enjoyed this.

prillalar April 7 2010, 18:51:20 UTC

Sweet! I'm glad it was so absorbing! I don't know why I never wrote these two before (well, more than a drabble) -- they are ridiculously fun together. Thank you for letting me know what you thought!

When I was posting the InuKai stories, it was SO TEMPTING to read them in advance. No wonder I ate so much chocolate that month; I used up all my willpower on the exchange!

Also, the icon on this post is PERFECT. :)

hamburgerjack April 7 2010, 19:28:35 UTC

Me too, this was the only one I really read, the others I skimmed for an appropriate lj-cut theme. XD

I didn't want to spoil myself on everyone's stories, I felt like that wouldn't be fair.

I can imagine Atobe picking names out of hats somewhere, trying to find someone interesting to date.

I loved the forks. I imagine that the forks Momo produced at the amusement park were all plastic. XD

prillalar April 7 2010, 20:08:43 UTC

He probably makes Kabaji do the actual pulling. Poor Atobe, so filled with ennui. :D

Maybe Momo spray-painted the forks so they would look like purest gold.

kat8cha April 8 2010, 20:15:31 UTC

There were WAY TOO MANLY lines that made me just go 'ROFLOL THIS IS AMAZING'

Just so you know.

This was amazing.

prillalar April 9 2010, 03:50:42 UTC

That's awesome to hear! Momo is by far my favourite POV character to write. He's such a charming doofus. :)

chaosraven April 9 2010, 23:40:03 UTC

This is the greatest Momo/Atobe EVER WRITTEN. <3

prillalar April 10 2010, 18:54:49 UTC

Out of, what, about five? :D Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it! I really had such a good time writing it.

chaosraven April 10 2010, 19:52:47 UTC

There might be more than that... somewhere. At least six. And since I actually found your Atobe charming instead of wanting to punch him, this one is the wins. <3

shikanashi_kk April 10 2010, 13:24:36 UTC

HOGAWD XD At first I was like "...Atobe/Momo" but at the end of this, I was "ATOBE/MOMO!!!!!!111one!!!" because HONESTLY, you make them WORK and I didn't think it was possible for them to... work D8

hogawd I love your Momo D8 JUST. Your Momo and your Atobe and even your Kaidoh XD I can so imagine their dates going like that. ♥

Thank you so much for writing this bb! <3333

prillalar April 10 2010, 18:56:03 UTC

I'm so glad to hear it had the desired effect. :) Little by little, I will make the whole fandom ship them. Momo is so much fun to write, it's probably criminal.

You are very welcome! ♥

emothy April 11 2010, 09:26:37 UTC

I already knew I would like Atobe/Momo, so unfortunately I'm not a convert. But I sat and read that with a smile so huge it almost split my face in half. This was wonderful. Everything was so spot-on; the damn duck jokes, the clueless observations on Momo's part, the forks! Clearly the signs of true love between Momo and Atobe are ducks and forks. And sex in a helicopter. Please consider writing them again, and not just in drabbles!

(I have read things you've written before, I am just usually too lazy or scared to comment XD).

prillalar April 11 2010, 15:30:17 UTC

It's so great to hear that you like the pairing and especially that you enjoyed the story! Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know. :) Definitely there will be more fic about them! They are way too much fun to leave alone.

There's got to be some sort of off-colour joke to be made about the forks and the ducks; perhaps Momo will think of it and be too embarrassed to say anything. :D

(Commenting is never required, though I hope you'll feel welcome to if you want to!)

emothy April 11 2010, 16:50:28 UTC

They are way too much fun to leave alone. Too right! XD

Would it be too stalkery of me to add you so that if you do write something I'll see it right away?

(Thank you :D )

prillalar April 11 2010, 17:26:52 UTC

It's totally fine to add me -- it's always great to get to know other people in tenipuri fandom, especially dramapuri fans! (I peeked at your LJ. :D) Hopefully you won't be bored by the usual blather. :)

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