help me with a title please

Jan 03, 2005 13:33

Sunlight sparkles on the silver lake ( Read more... )

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anonymous January 3 2005, 20:07:11 UTC
this is Catie. I think you should call this one "My Secrets Isle" I like the description alot! it sounds beautiful. makes me wish I could go there....lol

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Dude! lillindsay07 January 3 2005, 22:52:32 UTC
I love the idea that Catie had but I think that you should either call it what her idea was or "A Place to Get Away." I think that all these poems are great! Keep up the great work Joshy!
Lindsay Dawn

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brittbritt914 January 4 2005, 02:01:03 UTC
wow. I really like it too. Another idea for a title...something like "My Solitude" or maybe "Moment of Solitude" or even "Joy's Solitude". Like Lindz said. Keep up the good work!
~Britt

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