Comments | ouat_exchange: Happy Holidays, gvspurlock! (2/2)

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Happy Holidays, gvspurlock! (2/2)

Dec 23, 2013 17:46

type: fanfic, !gift, character: david nolan/prince charming, character: emma swan, character: mary margaret/snow white, character: belle, character: neal cassidy/baelfire, character: mr.gold/rumpelstiltskin, character: henry mills, !2013

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rodlox December 24 2013, 15:36:32 UTC

terrific second half.

>“Kid is Regina's son and Rumpelstiltskin's grandson. You seriously think if he wants power your gods are going to have anything to say about it?”
the fairy was probably hoping Emma didn't think of that.

>“I really hate what it says about Storybrooke that you had to specify that.” Emma frowned
great line.

>“Everybody is Santa Claus...” Emma started. Then looking at Gold asked. “There isn't is there?”
Midas wasn't enough? :)

gvspurlock January 16 2014, 20:15:10 UTC

What rodlox said! Marvelous writing. Love the Sprats continually filing for divorce and reconciling. Christmas presents are perfect-- I can see the three of them fishing and coming home with strange treasures, but no fish!

“Although less poison would have been better.” He added before munching on a shrimp. Master of understatement, Master Henry. Love the way you've written him here. Clever and very much his parents' son!