Comments | oudeteron: Long in the making

oudeteron

Long in the making

Jan 13, 2011 22:36

In more ways than one. I started this fic ages ago and wrote most of it at the time, but got stuck halfway through the last part and only got past that point a few days back. It was originally intended as a melting pot of sorts for my pre-MGS3 headcanon, though now it's more like one possibility among my different versions of said headcanon. Yeah, ( Read more... )

one-shots, big boss/zero, slash (problematic labelling aside), fic: mgs, writing, actual stories

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oreo_odin January 13 2011, 22:31:49 UTC

OMG Oude. This is so wonderful ;3;

It's short, sweet, and so in character (at least in my head-canon XD). And FFFFFFFFFFF sex on the American flag. Also Jack, the Boss wouldn't want you to smoke those! :'D
Gah i just loved how write snarky old Zero <3

oudeteron January 13 2011, 23:50:49 UTC

Aw, thank you! ;;

These were exactly the things I was going for, so I'm glad it came across (and clearly our headcanons should go for tea together). The flag was another reason I started writing this, but it became more subdued as I went along. XD And you know the only good thing about being separated from Boss was the opportunity to smoke cigars at least until the groping started.
Snarky, yeah, but he's not that old here yet! <3

cherrytruck January 14 2011, 15:50:12 UTC

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oudeteron January 16 2011, 15:10:33 UTC

HOLY CRAP FREUDIAN SLIP
THAT DIDN'T EVEN OCCUR TO ME AT THE TIME

your comments are a work of art oudeteron January 16 2011, 15:09:33 UTC

Haha, I just picked to call him Jack since both Boss and Zero use the diminutive (if not Snake) in MGS3, but you see it's really the same name. (YOU ARE TOO KIND)

Someone should tell Zero that 10 seconds of flirting won't quite make up for the hours of annoyance. XD

OH I WONDER HOW STRANGE IT'LL FEEL WHEN YOU'RE HAVING HOT SWEATY AIRTIGHT SEX WITH HIM HUHHHMMMM
MAYBE THAT'S THE ONLY TIME IT DOESN'T FEEL STRANGE

Oh dear Jack, so horny that you become humble!
You know shit's getting real, yo.

THERE SHOULD BE A PORNO CALLED "MY FIRST TIME WITH MY COMMANDER", OR SHOULD I SAY COMMAAARRRNDER
FFFFFFFFFFF
IF THAT DOESN'T EXIST SOMEWHERE, I WILL BE DISAPPOINTED

Beautiful keyboardsmash.

AND I DIDN'T ACTUALLY KNOW IT WAS A DATE.
"HAS ANYONE EVER TOLD YOU YOU'RE A BIT SLOW?" XD

Ahaha, I'd love to hear how Snake would imitate Zero's voice!Then listen to the tape in PW about Zero's coffee hate. How ironic BB's talking to Paz, under the impression Paz has no idea who he's talking about. (Yeah, I do realize he wouldn't have 100% the same voice ( ... )

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