I really enjoyed this story. Arthur's somewhat awkward pursuit of Merlin with his coffee cart is heart-warming, Gwen's irritation at Merlin being a bit in denial about his feelings is hilarious. I think the first time they hook-up is really well done, that weirdness when things don't go smoothly, and yet, Merlin still wants Arthur because he's Arthur, not because he's some sexual expert (or something!) He just likes the guy, and wants to try again, but Arthur is obviously taking the sex!fail to heart. Then when he admits he's never slept with anyone, (and has a fairly credible reason, being afraid of being caught, not being out for all that long), and Merlin laughs, that would HURT! I'm glad that the boys patch it all up in the end. I especially loved the bits where they are reminiscing about getting together.
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