F/K ficlet PG-13

Jun 18, 2006 13:57

17. Fraser/RayK. "Look, Fraser, we tried that last night and it didn't work." for alden_k
Thanks to lady_of_water for the quick beta. Con crit welcome :-p

Sorry this is late - My neighbor offered me 60 to babysit, and she has no internet. Got home at 4Am and crashed. The other two ficlets are at beta and should be posted shortly.

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j_s_cavalcante June 18 2006, 19:22:04 UTC
"Yeah, Oh dear all you want. You are so not getting any tonight."

Hee! Fraser's about to learn a new way in which crime doesn't pay. Poor Fraser!

I love Ray's shopping instructions, especially: Do not ask how they are doing, do not say hello, do not say thank you.

He knows Fraser! :)

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zeenell June 19 2006, 06:23:26 UTC
For all we know, fraser could have planned that instead of just saying he was nervous. Because Fraser would totally have difficulty into admitting he was scared Nervous.

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zeenell June 19 2006, 06:24:17 UTC
They made me giggle a bit. I had them a bit more detailed and than decided that Ray decided Fraser understood what he was supposed to do.

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alden_k June 18 2006, 19:34:56 UTC
Thanks a lot for this, sugar. It's exactly what I had in mind. I love Fraser's precise language here - I can imagine how flustered it would get Ray to have him talking about lube in public. Plus, the fact that they had apparently failed at it once - hilarious! Thanks again!

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zeenell June 19 2006, 06:25:32 UTC
Yay! I spent forever on this - Fraser is very difficult to get a handle on.

So glad you liked it. ^_^

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china_shop June 18 2006, 19:57:52 UTC
Heee! This is wonderful! Such great dialogue -- I can hear them. Poor Ray. *g*

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zeenell June 19 2006, 06:27:16 UTC
Thank you.

Normally dialogue is the hardest thing for me to write, but for some reason, with due south, it's the easiest part to write. *mindboggles*

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shoemaster June 18 2006, 21:10:00 UTC
Oh my god, the snippy overtones to the flirting and prelude to sex. And of course he'd take out a robber with a can of tuna. *shakes head* Fraser, Fraser, Fraser.

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zeenell June 19 2006, 06:30:24 UTC
Fraser would have thrown his gun, but he was in civvies. A leather jacket and a much too tight jeans. Worn jeans with a small hole right by the zipper but they are his favorite pair and he thinks his jackey covers it. Besides, it's a small hole.

I like this image of Fraser I had. Bet Ray is gonna feel sorry for himself when they get back to the apartment.

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