Hi, its Bart of course. I'm thinking that I'm going to try interpretting your poems and commenting what they mean to me. You can either respond or be content in knowing someone is reading your writings and commenting. You may do the same for me or just go pee.
I think this one is mainly about your coming to terms with being so far away from everyone you love. It starts out as though you're documenting your moments of homesickness/ longing to return but then I get the feeling that this is more about Kat. When you say "with some jerk eying your beauty" it jsut made me think you were refering to Kat. Also you go on to express, at least as I see it, a secret desire to not be tied to that feeling that gives you both great joy and undying hurt in your relationship. You curse yourself for it, knowing that the true cost of love is love- cliche saying. These episodes of feeling co0me and go and the poem exits as the feeling exits. transient in your poem is this roadmap of your persistant decline into madness and gentle release of its
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I think this one is mainly about your coming to terms with being so far away from everyone you love. It starts out as though you're documenting your moments of homesickness/ longing to return but then I get the feeling that this is more about Kat. When you say "with some jerk eying your beauty" it jsut made me think you were refering to Kat. Also you go on to express, at least as I see it, a secret desire to not be tied to that feeling that gives you both great joy and undying hurt in your relationship. You curse yourself for it, knowing that the true cost of love is love- cliche saying. These episodes of feeling co0me and go and the poem exits as the feeling exits. transient in your poem is this roadmap of your persistant decline into madness and gentle release of its
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