Comments | outlands: (#023) ☆ 1 manga coloring.

electricfizz in outlands

(#023) ☆ 1 manga coloring.

Oct 26, 2009 16:47

No icons today, but I'll probably have an icon post by the end of this week. So, I'm going to post a scan I colored a few days ago. I been wanting to experiment more with reflecting light as well as some coloring changes. There are some things that I like, and some that I don't about this. I'd appreciate any feedback as to what you like and don't ( Read more... )

!electricfizz, manga colorings, manga: karneval

Comments 24

raelynae October 27 2009, 00:51:59 UTC

I think I love you. Karneval *,*

I think you did a really good job trying to do the coloring during the night, and utilizing a strong point source for your light. I think one of the things that maybe throwing off the effect might be the intense saturation of colors all the way through the image rather than it dulling in the shadows, and perhaps the fact that it is really prominent in some areas, for example the clothing, but it isn't mirrored in the hair to the same extent. I don't know. Was this what you were wanting?

Don't get me wrong though I really like your color choices for everything, and I love your use of color here. My favorites are quite possibly Gareki's jacket (because of the transition of the cranberry color to the orange), and Eva's clothes (there's so many little details there but you retained them really well). I think you did an awesome job here. Thanks for sharing!

electricfizz October 27 2009, 01:28:30 UTC

I see what you mean with the saturation of things. I kind of got more focused on the light reflecting rather than working more with the shadows. Considering this is a night scene, I should have gone darker but at the same time I wanted things to be visible. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a happy medium of the both.

Thank you so much for your critique, and I'll be sure to keep in mind everything you have said next time I do something like this. :) ♥

loveless3173 October 27 2009, 00:59:16 UTC

omg... this is amazing!! Its wonderful!! <33

electricfizz October 27 2009, 01:28:58 UTC

Thank you. :)

twentyfiveraven October 27 2009, 01:18:35 UTC

This is so gorgeous I just...the night sky is just so wonderful and ethereal and guuuuhhh.
Eva looks so beautiful~ I love her skin ♥

electricfizz October 27 2009, 01:29:27 UTC

o////o thank you so much!
Her skin was my favorite to do. :)

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electricfizz October 31 2009, 09:47:12 UTC

It makes it easier that I have a tablet to work with. /sweatdrops

Thank you very much!

asatosei October 27 2009, 08:11:40 UTC

amazing ♥ ♥

electricfizz October 31 2009, 09:47:25 UTC

ty ♥