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outsidethebx

Her Memory

Oct 03, 2007 22:24

Title: Her Memory
Author: Outsidethebx
Fandom: Scrubs
Pairing: Jordan/Elliot
Rating: NC-17 (spanking)
Prompt: I wrote this for femslash_today, in response to The Porn Battle
AN: The prompt was Jordan/Elliot and "spank."
Archiving: Sure
Disclaimer: I have no ownership of Scrubs

( Her Memory )

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Comments 12

runetraverse October 4 2007, 02:35:19 UTC

*snicker* I don't usually like spank fics, but this is quite funny. xD Definitely love Elliot to death now. Her freak-out over her boobs and happy squeal at the end was great! Kudos. ^^

outsidethebx October 4 2007, 02:56:23 UTC

*g* Thank you. This one wasn't beta'd, so I was a bit nervous in posting it. As usual, thanks for commenting. :)

gsrfan7 October 4 2007, 03:01:49 UTC

Great job.

outsidethebx October 4 2007, 03:10:05 UTC

Thank you.

xclairedelune October 4 2007, 18:00:13 UTC

Yes...another one with just the right amount of light touch...the "pretty much"....says it all, but understated.

Good work...(uh..I gotta watch Scrubs....)

outsidethebx October 7 2007, 22:20:45 UTC

YAY! Hopefully you will give Scrubs a go. I have to warn you though--the show--it very very gay, but doesn't lend to very many Elliot/Jordan scenes. The ones that they have, however, are quite the slashy bunch. :)

ralst October 6 2007, 15:42:08 UTC

Elliot really does need to learn to listen. Good one *g*.

outsidethebx October 7 2007, 14:43:24 UTC

First of all, I dunno if I've mentioned this yet, but I *heart* your icon. Classic.

Yes, Elliot does need to listen. :) Glad you liked it.

ohmanhattan October 6 2007, 19:13:54 UTC

Once again with a late comment. Oh yes! The SPANK prompt. I tried and tried to answer this.

Elliot is so oblivious sometimes - you captured this well.

“I’m not going to lean over the couch and become your little toy.”

“Little late for that argument.”

Ha. I'll say. Man I love this pairing. More!

outsidethebx October 7 2007, 14:42:41 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. After we discussed the spank prompt (via comments), I thought I'd give it a go.

I simply couldn't go any more x-rated than I did. I thought, even though it was for the porn battle, that any more xxx stuff would have been a bit forced.

I love the humor between these two, and wanted to ensure it was included.

I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on a Bad Girls fic right now, but afterward, I'm going to try to answer your challenge in the Elliot/Jordan community. :)