Introduction to the Unexpected

Jul 29, 2007 23:59

Fandom: Bad Girls
Pairing: Helen/Karen
Summary: This is my first attempt at Helen/Karen, as I've noticed not a lot of fics contain this pairing.
Disclaimer: I have no ownership of Bad girls
Chapter 1

Chapter 2 )

helen/karen, bad girls, fic

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spankspike August 3 2007, 01:59:35 UTC
Hi!

I'm one of the mods at the FeedMyKink community. I saw that you applied for membership, but because we're an adult community (because of all the kink, lol!) we needed to make sure that you were old enough because you didn't have your full dob on you info page. If you don't want to post it there, it would be fine if you just respond to my email with it and I'll approve you right away - because we'd love to have you as a new member!

If you have any other questions, please feel free to contact me or my co-mod Sevendeadlyfun.

Thanks,

Tisa (SpankSpike)

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outsidethebx August 3 2007, 02:23:43 UTC
I edited my profile to include my DOB. I'll probably take it down once the membership is officially approved, but you should be able to view it now.

cheers :)

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akte August 8 2007, 06:25:36 UTC
more? please? I can't to read Helen's struggle/justification with all of this. And of course, i can't wait to read what goes on in that room ;)

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outsidethebx August 8 2007, 14:05:23 UTC
Oh there will be more! I'm currently working on a Helen/Nikki fic, as I was prompted to do so by ralst. After that one is completed, I'll be writing chapter 3. :)

I'm obviously not jumping to smut. I'm trying to follow the natural progression that one would experience when introduced to the scene. Eventually...they will have fun. For now, I want to show the inward (and outward) struggle that Helen will deal with.

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akte August 8 2007, 14:11:59 UTC
that's good. Too often people just jump straight into the smut, without giving the characters any time to come to terms with exactly what they are doing.

I realised I left a word out of my last comment - it was meant to read 'I can't WAIT to read Helen's stuggle...' oops!

TBH - Helen/Nikki is my pairing of choice for BG, but I've really enjoyed the flow of these two chapters. I've not read a lot of BG fic before (i've only just discovered fic in the last 6 months! Started reading just SVU, then writing a bit as well, and now i'm branching out into reading BG/CSI:Vegas.

Do you know of any other *good* (and I stress the *good*) D/s Bad Girls fics? Are there any others out there? I'd love to read any if you could point me in the direction of some :)

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outsidethebx August 8 2007, 17:45:40 UTC
Honestly, I've only been really into fan fiction since June. Since my discovery, I can't get enough. I enjoy writing just as much as reading ( ... )

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fic anonymous August 20 2007, 22:14:47 UTC
this is a really good start. Its great to read something slightly different to the usual helen/nikki story(not that i dislike h/n stories!). I hope there is more soon.
c

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Re: fic outsidethebx August 21 2007, 22:18:19 UTC
I'm currently on a Helen/Nikki kick, but eventually I'll return to this. I don't have the personality to start and not finish something. :)

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Re: fic anonymous September 1 2007, 01:25:11 UTC
thanks for the reply-its great to know that you are eventually going to return to this-it is so annoying when a fic is started and then not continued(particularly if its really good)although i know other things do get in the way.
c
p.s is this fic set during series 2 or 3?

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Re: fic outsidethebx September 13 2007, 22:13:36 UTC
I think it's officially set for season 3. I'll get around eventually. :)

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