Taking it Slow

[outsidethebx]

Title: Taking it Slow
Author: Outsidethebx
Fandom: Bad Girls
Pairing: Helen/Nikki
Summary: What happened after Helen and Nikki's reunion at the end of season 3?
Prompt: This idea came from sophie_lover. The fic is written for ralst for the passion_perfect "Speed Challenge '07

Comments

[sophie_lover]

First let me say OMG I can't believe you used my idea :)!!! That totally rocks...thank you *hugs*!! And 2nd this is total sticky yummy goodness!! Nikki in the pink dolphin shirt too cute!! Luv them teasing each other... I can completely see them like that!!

[outsidethebx]

*g* Glad you liked it. After you gave me the idea, I couldn't get it out of my head, so thank you!

[sophie_lover]

Ahhh...*smiles*!! Glad I could spark your muse's imagination! And oh what an imagination it is...hehe ;)!!

[redsnake05]

Sweet, hot and realistic. The phonecall from the jouranlist was a bit creepy, but it gave a very satisfying ring of authenticity to the trails they have had getting together. And the sex? Yum.

[outsidethebx]

Thanks for the feedback. When I've written "smutish" stuff in the past, I missed the story lines and realized I was basically writing porn with the characters I liked. I was really hoping to have a decent story line that naturally progressed to sex, so I'm hoping that was achieved. I'm glad you liked it!

[redsnake05]

Yeah, it can be so easy to fall into the porn trap, because it's hot or you just feel like doing something light-hearted and sexy. Plot is much harder, I think.

[yellowsnakepoet]

Um... damn.

[outsidethebx]

Guessing you liked it? *g*

[yellowsnakepoet]

Yeah. Hehe, sorry. I sometimes leave vague comments like that in response to people's writing. Good job.