Nikki's Beginning

[outsidethebx]

Title: Nikki's Beginning
Author: Outsidethebx
Fandom: Bad Girls
Pairing: Helen/Nikki
Summary: What did Nikki experience directly after her guilty verdict?
Prompt: This is written for Challenge #25-New Beginnings, for the_pottingshed
AN: Beta'd by bank_farter
Word Count: 731
Archiving: Sure
Disclaimer: I have no ownership of Bad girls

Comments

[gsrfan7]

Ha. I love the interaction with Sylvia

[outsidethebx]

Thanks! She's becoming one of my characters to write, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. It's also my favorite part of the fic.

[redsnake05]

Heh. Do I get the feeling that Sylvia deserves every snarky comment? I loved that bit. And the anonymous warning as the guard drops Nikki in her cell.

[outsidethebx]

Sylvia deserves everything dished out to her, that's for sure! THe problem with her is that sometimes she can't take an equal portion of what she gives.

Glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback. I enjoy hearing what people specifically enjoyed.

[redsnake05]

I agree - I love hearing what people think worked and didn't work. I always enjoy your fic because I don't follow the show yet find your stories very accessible. I'm also thinking of a few femmeslash stories (maybe regency era ones), and so enjoy reading to get ideas on how different people approach stories.

[outsidethebx]

I do the same thing. I've only been writing femmeslash since June, so I enjoy reading other people's work to see how they created their story lines, built up the characters, wrote their sex scenes, etc.

My world has totally opened up since entering the world of fan fic too. I don't think I'll ever watch TV the same ever again. It's like I watch now to see where the underlining relationships are, what subtext is present, who I would like to pair up. For instance: The two agents in Numb3rs--David and Colby--so gay. *g*

[yellowsnakepoet]

You had me laughing out loud.

[outsidethebx]

Thanks-I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)