The Truth Comes Out

[outsidethebx]

Title: The Truth Comes Out
ore.Author: Outsidethebx
Fandom: Bad Girls
Pairing: Nikki/Sylvia
Summary: Don't worry, the thought of smut between these two eeks me out too. This is what happened when Nikki and Sylvia were stuck in a cell together.
Prompt: I wrote this to fit two prompts from passion_perfect
The Turbolift Fics
Tales of 1001 Nights-"Weak"AN: Beta and

Comments

[gsrfan7]

This story was priceless. I liked it...and I don't know why, but towards the end, I was expecting Sylvia to say she was gay. But, that's a whole other story.

[outsidethebx]

I had so much fun writing this story and had many different directions in mind. Sylvia being gay was one of them, but I wanted to go with the unexpected. When people see femme slash, they think both women will be queer. So, aside from the sudden "eww" when they first see Nikki/Sylvia, I hope more people enjoy it. I'm glad you did!

[redsnake05]

This was great. These sorts of conversations can go so many different ways, and you have perfectly captured one of them. Just one typo spotted: you can’t admit your actually feelings - I'm nto sure which way this was meant to go.

[outsidethebx]

Thanks for spotting the typo--It's fixed. :)

I'm glad you liked it. Yes, it could have gone various ways, but I'm glad you approve of the direction this one took.

[xclairedelune]

Yes..I agree with the others...I like the humorous aspect of it all (tongue in cheek, if you will)....the BG epi where Sylvia gets locked in the cell was one of the better ones because of the humor.

Sylvia has been asking for little one-on-one.....I think you are on a great track here.

[outsidethebx]

I agree with you--that was one of my favorite episodes, and also a great thing about BG-the bullies eventually get what's coming to them. (Fenner, Shell, the O'Kanes, Grayling, Sylvia--all go through difficult times after being such arseholes!)

Sylvia, IMO, has some of the best one-liners of the entire series, and is such a fun character to write.

I'm glad you liked the fic. You working on anything new? I've noticed you haven't posted in a while. *hint* :)

[xclairedelune]

Well...I have begun something, but it took a turn away from where I wanted it to come out..so I left it for a while as I am tryng to reform it in my head first.

I am away from home visiting family at the moment and there is bustle in the air here which is nice, but not giving me the thinking time. I will be back home on Monday and hopefully will begin again....

[outsidethebx]

...looking forward to it. :)

[shatterpath]

Ha! That was great! Interesting twist on the femslash indeed. I also have to agree with everyone about the fact that Bodybag is obsessed with the gay girls. Poor old git...

But we could say that about early Helen too, eh?

[outsidethebx]

Yeah, she did give the 'ole gay girls some trouble. I always thought she was closeted. (that might lead to another fic, but I wanted to ease everyone in to the idea . I didn't want to cause a massive lj hiatus at the thought of Sylvia w/another woman, or admitting to being queer.)

And yes, early Helen--obsessed much! I think she knew something was going on inside her head but was way to scared, and valued control too much to let these "feelings" slip out. I'm glad you liked the fic.

Btw-I was looking at your journal and noticed that your fics have many chapters. Can I pick up any one and not be lost or do I need to start at the beginning? (I'm excited cuz I *heart* some Calleigh)

[shatterpath]

Getting anyone to believe ole Syl coming out will be a hella challenge! Absolutely you should go for it, but you've got your work cut out for ay. *chuckles*

*Embarassed* I'm not very good at marking my damn stories very well. Ummm.. worse case scenario, I can email stuff. And yes, love me some Calleigh! My best piece is http://shatterpath.livejournal.com/65817.html#cutid1
enjoy!

[azaufan]

loved it!

[outsidethebx]

Thanks! :) Glad you did.