Through All the Music Comes the Dies Irae (24/?)

Jun 26, 2012 18:51

Title: Through All the Music Comes the Dies Irae
Part: 24/?
Author:  outuendo_11
Fandom: The Closer
Pairings: Brenda Leigh Johnson/ Sharon Raydor - with some Fritz (for a bit)
Rating: PG (nothing too flashy yet...or for awhile)
Summary: Both women have come to a crossroad in their lives.
A/N: So the long awaited chapter has arrived. I hope this lives up ( Read more... )

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claireterm June 27 2012, 01:27:22 UTC
I have been enjoying this series so much. I am so happy each time you post a new chapter. There is so much subtlety, tenderness and love described. The situations are real, the characters believable and you address some very important points of that relationship and the relationships between Sharon, Brenda and the rest of the family. It is delicate, thoughtful, and it brings me great comfort to think that you have described so well the psychology of the characters.
Please keep on posting. I am looking forward to it each week.

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outuendo_11 June 29 2012, 03:47:57 UTC
I am in awe of your awesome review. Thank you so much for enjoying this and for appreciating the realness of this story. It means a lot, really! I'm glad that you enjoy my dabble in exploring the psychology of each character and the various relationships. I think it's fun to explore these.

Anyway, more soon! Thank you for reviewing. It really means so much.

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spedlady June 27 2012, 01:33:53 UTC
I loved the meeting of Brenda Lee and Sharon's father! It was also entertaining for him to shoo her out the door before Sharon's mother woke up!
So, Sharon is going to be depressed and irritable over more chemotherapy? Does that mean she's going to put up a fight with Brenda Lee about a relationship?
I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!

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outuendo_11 June 29 2012, 03:49:03 UTC
I'm not sure what she's going to do with Brenda Leigh quite yet...who knows! Perhaps she will keep fighting her, but I hope for the sake of this story and reviewers like you and myself that she'll give in soon. I think they're close. Real close!

Ha, thanks for reviewing. :)

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caity_love June 27 2012, 02:50:00 UTC
I SERIOUSLY WANT TO SEE A HIGH!SHARON IN AN UPCOMING CHAPTER, YOU GOT THAT?

In all seriousness though, I loved the interaction between Brenda and Sharon's father in this chapter. He seems not to be too judgmental and I like it.

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outuendo_11 June 29 2012, 03:49:54 UTC
Hmm...I think I can arrange that. :) Probably...

I'm glad you liked Brenda and Thomas. I'm glad that at least he knows now. I think it will make Brenda feel better about what she's doing.

Thanks for reviewing. :)

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joelthecat June 27 2012, 04:34:30 UTC
Hmmm. Given Brenda's demonstrated naivete about the Evil Weed, I wonder what she's going to make of it if Sharon takes the prescription.

And then again, wouldn't it be beautiful if one of her boys caught her picking up Sharon's weed?

Sharon's parents are beautiful characters, and the story is simply a delight. Thank you so much for posting more of it.

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outuendo_11 June 29 2012, 03:52:07 UTC
Thank you for continuing to comment! I'm so glad you really enjoy this. And I think Brenda might learn a thing or two about the positives of weed. Maybe. I'm sure she wants to see her Sharon feeling better.

That would be a funny situation!

Thanks again. :)

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outuendo_11 June 29 2012, 03:53:26 UTC
Well, I will try my hardest to finish it so you have more to enjoy. Thank you also for appreciating their relationship. I like to see them close, and I am also certain that sex will happen, just maybe slowly...but...soon! I promise! :)

Thank you for reading.

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