Candles

Aug 21, 2012 14:55

Title: Candles: a fic inspired by a song
Author: outuendo_11
Show: The Closer
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon, Sharon/OC
Rating: M
A/N: Well here is a little fic to tide you over before I finish up posting "Through all the..." (which will be soon...I think I just finished writing it, so be excited). Anyway, this story was inspired by this song I heard. I think you should ( Read more... )

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nvgvup August 21 2012, 21:52:06 UTC
Wow very sad.

Its interesting how Sharon seems so unsure of herself in the bar with the young man but so in control on the phone with Brenda. Like she only has confidence & control when it comes to this woman who clearly makes her loose her sense. She needed to get swept away. Though her partner didn't quite fulfill his end of that promise.

It was neutral ground and her orgasms seemed to be reserved for someone who didn’t deserve them at all.
This is a beautiful sentence.

“Don’t be mad at me, Sharon. I can’t help it…”
“You can and you know it.”
Love this exchange and the harshness of Sharon's response.

the ruthless leader during the day, was a sad mess at night.
This is so true and part of what made Brenda such a fascinating character to know. It seems they're doing it a bit with Sharon, as well. While not quite as insane as Brenda, Sharon certainly seems to have it together at work and then feel overwhelmed when she gets home.

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lindy999 August 22 2012, 01:37:22 UTC
Oh my, that was intense. I'd really like to see what caused this and also how it ends up, but of course, I'm always looking for more information on this relationship...

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madampresident August 23 2012, 02:55:07 UTC
Great fic! Also I downloaded the song!

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ext_4680240 June 11 2018, 16:53:02 UTC
Oh God, I think she geels like shit. It's not clear but looks like Brenda is with Fritz and didn't choose Sharon, jet... Well done, great, sad story 💖👠. Thanks

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