Glee fic; Every Second's a Longer Wait, Puck/Sam, pg-13

[overstreets]

Title: Every Second's a Longer Wait
Part: 1/1
Pairing: Puck/Sam
Rating/warnings: PG-13
Word Count: 9337
Notes: This is set in the same 'verse as The Right Side of Reason and I'm Numbing My Feeling.
Summary: Sam lives by two simple rules: don't date anyone who disses Batman, and don't molest straight boys. Unfortunately, he's having trouble with

Comments

[go_away_finchel]

this.is.amazing.

so worth the wait.

the writing is impeccable, the characterization is so realistic, the kissing was so hot - i cannot wait for more - there will be more, right????

you are an awesome writer.

[overstreets]

There will be more, yes! I'm really glad you liked this. I worry about all the parts just because I'm a worrier, haha, but especially this one because it was sooo much of Sam going in and out of his own head. So I'm very pleased that the characterization worked for you. :) Thank you for reading!

[deviant_dev]

I have no words for how amazing this fic is. I actually squeed out loud when I saw you updated. Can't wait for more! Oh, and that kiss? Nngh. I wasn't even there, but I think I felt it, rofl.

[overstreets]

Thank you! So glad you're enjoying this. I tried my best to make that kiss memorable - it's their first, after all ;)

[deviant_dev]

Well then, let me just say... job well done, lol! Goal achived. Now write faster. There's been far too much lack in Sallingstreet lately, so I need something to keep me hanging on, lol!

[overstreets]

Definitely! There needs to be more Sallingstreet and Puck/Sam around, I need it to keep me going, haha.

[badboy_fangirl]

I was just thinking about you earlier today and wondering about these boys, and then surprise! Here this is, and it's absolute perfection.

Poor Sam, my heart just aches for him. And I love that Puck's obviously been thinking this through, and the kissing was an experiment of sorts--one that I hope Puck liked far more than he's letting on.

I ship these two so hard, and your writing just makes them all the more shippable. So wonderful.

Sorry for the edits, but I have to add: hair kink! I love that Puck touched Sam's hair while they were kissing.

[overstreets]

Awww yay, I'm glad it didn't disappoint! Thanks for reading. Puck has definitely been doing some thinking, and the next part will be back to his POV so we'll figure out if he's had any great epiphanies for himself. And yesss, you remembered the hair kink! Hahaha :) Puck definitely has it.

[badboy_fangirl]

I just re-read this because it's so delicious, and I forgot to say how much I loved Santana calling Sam "Lady Lips." Very good there (and the characterization of all the other Gleeks who turned up in this piece), but I just had my own epiphany about San possibly helping Puck explore his bi-curiousness. I mean, wouldn't she encourage that as someone who indulges herself? Hmmm. I seriously can't wait for the next part.

[anonymous]

Where do I begin? This is the first time I've ever felt it necessary to comment on a story. I don't even have an account! But these three stories you wrote, especially Right Side of Reason, are damn near perfect. By far the best Suck fanfics out there. For some reason I unconsciously latched onto my ear while I read this and didn't realize I was about to rip it off until I finished. Needless to say, I was pretty enthralled

[overstreets]

If you could actually see the GIGANTIC smile on my face... yeah, embarrassing. But seriously, WOW, this comment is so lovely, and I'm thrilled that you're finding this story and characterization of Puck and Sam enjoyable. I really really appreciate that you read and commented! ♥

[anonymous]

As if my comment wasn't long enough, I have one more thing to say (or 1,000): Never stop being descriptive. It's like the story breathes and has a beating heart. "....he can feel Puck’s pulse from where he’s holding his wrists." So simple but so powerful. No words, actions, emotions, or anything go untouched and it's such an intense, vivid experience. It's raw and gritty but in a very sweet way. What I'm trying to say but in less words: Great job. :)

[overstreets]

This is why I love writing from Sam's POV, because I feel like he'd notice little things like Puck's pulse. The Sam in my head is so thoughtful and aware, so it's fun trying to capture that in the story. Your comments are making me blush, I kind of love you right now. :)

[forgetheartache]

I lovelovelove this `verse, you've created. I didn't even know i was a puck/sam shipper, 'till i read all three parts! :D You capture Puck's awesome lines/voice and Sam's geekiness. It's true love, i tell you. ♥ this is amazing and you gotta continue this. ♥

[overstreets]

Seriously, for canon, I am all about Sam/Kurt. But Puck/Sam is just addictive, and I love the two characters so much. :) I'm really glad you like this so far, thanks for reading!