Fic: Better

Jan 26, 2012 20:09

X-Men: First Class

Title: Better
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Erik/Charles
Length: 808 words.
Summary: Post-beach. A drunken Erik telephones Charles. Response to kink_meme prompt: Erik crying.

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raffi January 27 2012, 07:03:13 UTC
My heart

How am I suppose to collect what's left of it now? Look! It shattered to the tiniest pieces..

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ovestedinterest January 30 2012, 01:13:43 UTC
<3!!

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musical_emjay January 27 2012, 07:55:48 UTC
Ohhhhh man, my heart hurts, but it hurts so good ;______; ♥

Lovely work.

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ovestedinterest January 30 2012, 01:15:40 UTC
Thank you! <3

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shameless_klutz January 27 2012, 13:26:12 UTC
Oh God. My heart. It hurts so good.

T__T

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ovestedinterest January 30 2012, 01:21:14 UTC
<3!

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crow821 January 27 2012, 13:52:37 UTC
Omg this was so perfectly Sad. It's utterly perfect. And the lines where Eriks remembering their road trip.. ack. My heart.

Only thing I noticied was that (depending on when this was supposed to be set) the phone may have had a dial instead of buttons. Other than that, utter brilliance.

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ovestedinterest January 30 2012, 01:27:01 UTC
thank you!

Oh I did not pick that up. Eep, anachronisms bother me in other fic, thank you for pointing it out.

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ovestedinterest January 30 2012, 01:27:35 UTC
Thank you so much!

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