Comments | owl_wishes: A Tale Divided: Part 3

owl_wishes

A Tale Divided: Part 3 - Tea & Ice Cream

Jun 23, 2013 23:19

( Jenny grinned into... )

emma, fanfic, jenny

Comments 20

anonymous June 26 2013, 12:39:43 UTC

Beautiful ending to a wonderfully amazing story. I absolutely LOVE your writing! I look forward to more :)

owl_wishes July 13 2013, 07:16:11 UTC

Well, Anon, I absolutely love your comments. Thank you for reading. :)

lazerbug2006 June 26 2013, 20:34:54 UTC

Jenny's realization that she could possibly "ruin" Emma's life with her parents almost made me sniffle! I LOVED this one so much! The way Jenny thinks to herself that she is for sure falling incredibly fast and hard for Emma is SWOON! You always seem to pull me with your stories and I CAN'T wait until the next one :)

owl_wishes July 13 2013, 07:15:46 UTC

You could see it in her eyes at the beginning, exactly how fast she was falling for Emma. :) I couldn’t help but put it in writing as well. Thanks for the fantastic comment.

jamster74 June 27 2013, 12:07:28 UTC

What another wonderful part!!! This was just so beautiful. Your writing is just so beautiful...there are no words. Thank you for making my Sunday's so much better :) I can't wait to see what you come up with next :)

owl_wishes July 13 2013, 07:16:43 UTC

I don’t know, I’d say you did pretty good with finding words. Thank you for being so kind. :)

lostingreeneyes June 30 2013, 06:46:39 UTC

My dearest Jel...erm....Owly!! I was SO looking forward to this part that I opened your LJ on Monday morning just before I had to leave for work because I had to know if you'd updated. Which you had, so I spent my whole workday being a really happy bunny and couldn't wait to get home and read it. (Yes, I tortured myself like that. And it was absolutely worth it ( ... )

owl_wishes July 13 2013, 07:31:25 UTC

Should I be proud that you tortured yourself like that all day just to read my story? Because strangely I am… And I’ve totally corrupted you. And here no one was supposed to know what a big softie you truly are. I’ll do my best to keep from making you suffer too long without an update ( ... )

partoetorno June 30 2013, 15:23:29 UTC

"She worried about how they’d look entering into the house. What if Emma's parents realized that she and Emma weren’t just friends? And was it okay if they stood together? Or did that give them away that much faster? Who am I kidding, she groaned inwardly as they waited at a crosswalk, I never knew how to just be Emma’s friend ( ... )

owl_wishes July 13 2013, 07:18:30 UTC

I agree with your favorite part. I think that Jenny fell first, and only later did she and Emma become friends as well as lovers. And it was beautiful to watch her do that. :) After all, there’s a reason so many of us fell in love with them. Thank you for the lovely comment. :)