I forgot to breathe for a second...
anonymous
July 27 2014, 17:25:58 UTC
Wow, that was one heck of a roller coaster ride of emotions. Jenny's pain is so raw and unrelenting and yet Emma is still able to save her from feeling completely worthless. I really wish you could write stories about these two for the rest of time, but I know that this story is your last one.
Re: I forgot to breathe for a second...owl_wishesAugust 7 2014, 18:46:35 UTC
Jenny is going to be okay soon, I promise. There’s only one part left to this story, you won’t have to wait long. There’s a part of me that also kind of wants to write stories about these two for the rest of time…but there are tons of stories on here, and the rest of their adventures are up to you to imagine.
Thank you for the sweet comment. And keep breathing! No fainting until AFTER the last part, understood?
Poor Jenny...she had done her best all day to keep the 'ghosts' in her head away and control her emotions all day. I think it was inevitable that she would fall. Thankfully Emma, as always, was there to give her the support, time and love to lift Jenny back up. Will this be her last 'breakdown'? I have a feeling not...but with Emma there to catch her, I think Jenny will soon begin to heal, even if she doesn't forget. Beautiful as always. Patiently awaiting the next chap. =)
Jenny can't win with the "war" going on within her! Even through all the darkness, Jenny never forgets that Emma is her stability and her sanity. Emma never fails to be patient and to always allow Jenny to feel her love through all her pain~ I always look forward to more :) AWESOME UPDATE!
Wonderful, wonderful update. I've had finished reading all your stories (previous weekend), so it absolutely made my day when I saw I had another installment to read. Stunning writing. I feel like I'm really there, in the story, as it unfolds (without being seen). You truly have a beautiful way of explaining feelings, especially when those feelings are so raw and difficult to cope with. What ever processes (thought and draft) you use for writing they are second to none. I am so looking forward to seeing how this day ends for Jenny and Emma (but sad because it will be your last story). PS - I so need to try out these German pastries, they sound delicious!
All the chapters in this story are so beautiful writing with cares! You fill up the possibly missing part of Jenny after her parents died, and let us continues the journey with Jemma. Thank you very much!
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Thank you for the sweet comment. And keep breathing! No fainting until AFTER the last part, understood?
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Waiting patiently (and breathing normally) for the next part.
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Beautiful as always. Patiently awaiting the next chap.
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Stunning writing.
I feel like I'm really there, in the story, as it unfolds (without being seen). You truly have a beautiful way of explaining feelings, especially when those feelings are so raw and difficult to cope with. What ever processes (thought and draft) you use for writing they are second to none.
I am so looking forward to seeing how this day ends for Jenny and Emma (but sad because it will be your last story).
PS - I so need to try out these German pastries, they sound delicious!
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All the chapters in this story are so beautiful writing with cares! You fill up the possibly missing part of Jenny after her parents died, and let us continues the journey with Jemma. Thank you very much!
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