What you don't want

Apr 05, 2012 22:01

Title: What you don't want
Pairing: Sehun/Luhan
Word Count: 1,821
Genre: PWP
Rating: NC-17
Summary: It is a constant routine and as much as Luhan says he doesn't want this, that things need to stop, they just won't. This time, things go a bit farther.

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genre: pwp, fandom: exo, pairing: sehun/luhan, rating: nc-17

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maknaelover12 April 6 2012, 13:31:29 UTC
i seriously shouldn't be reading this.

but then it's hunhan. and it's smut.

/finishes the whole thing

/dead x_____x

p.s. you dear author are perfect. this baby too.

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owlus April 7 2012, 14:52:41 UTC
YOU SHOULD BE READING THIS AND LOOK!, YOU DID READ IT ^^

p.s. sooooooob, i wish i was perfect but thank you! that means a lot to me! i am really,really happy you liked this!

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yui8_lin April 7 2012, 06:31:25 UTC
ASADFGDHFJKLJHGFDS
I was going to reply your comment in my comment in your OnKey {LOL} and I entered in here to see what you have new and YOU FUCKING WROTE A SEHUN/LUHAN I'm going to cry really ;____;

First time reading this {Breaths deeply}
Here I go :3

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owlus April 7 2012, 14:53:06 UTC
I hope you like it ;A; since you liked the onkey one! please do enjoy~

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yui8_lin April 25 2012, 00:51:33 UTC
Can I cry for this?
Like really cry

Because is so much, and is so beautiful and... I'm a mess.
I re-read it just for the sake of write a proper comment but, this my dear deserves a lot of re-reads :')

And I'm quoting it!:

Luhan hums in approval because he knows that if he falls, Sehun will catch him.
This is exactly the end of the first paragraph and you already got me with this. Their relationship in here is just, idk I really like the fact that Luhan keeps denying it until the end. And Sehun obviously doesn't believes it :)

“If you didn’t want me, then you wouldn’t be so fucking wet for me.”
TRUE FACT! But seriously, you're a master writing smut fics. Like truly a really good sentence. {ASDFGHJHGFD WAE SEHUN IS SO HOT, it shouldn't be legal at his age :X}

This is what Sehun makes of him as he tears down those walls that Luhan likes to build.
And I just like this sentence because is pure love you know? Because even though they're fucking {it's in a wall xD} they're like almost -completely- making love. I guess I'm not making ( ... )

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pedo_oppars April 7 2012, 10:06:10 UTC
omfg i can't explain how i feel after reading this omg ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ugh seriously i was waiting for some hunhan porn and here it is ~! omg i love you

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owlus April 7 2012, 14:53:32 UTC
:O i love you too! and i am glad i could make you happy by writing/posting this! ^^

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yunho April 7 2012, 14:01:34 UTC
oh wow i really enjoyed this. the underlying tension/distress and self conflict in luhan was so sharp and almost painful, but i think the ending brought it all back before it became too...sad, for lack of a better term. it was really emotional!

thank you for sharing! :)

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owlus April 7 2012, 14:55:29 UTC
wahh, i am really happy that you enjoyed this. i was really trying to get that across about how luhan felt, and what was going on inside of him with the conflict about it all. i am glad that you saw it!

and you're welcome!

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bicheul April 8 2012, 00:12:24 UTC
falls to the floor and sobs loudly and incoherently

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owlus April 8 2012, 02:45:49 UTC
/picks you up

D:

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