THE NANNY

Aug 26, 2013 20:56

Title: The Nanny.
Characters/Pairings: Luciano, Martín, Sebastián, and a small mention of Daniel (Brazil, Argentina, Uruguay and Paraguay, respectively).
Rating: G for vocabulary.
Warnings: AU. Baby!Martín. It’s a valid warning, I guess…
Summary: And so, shooting both of them a hesitant last glance, Sebastián left through the door, leaving Luciano ( Read more... )

lh: paraguay, fanfiction, lh: brasil, latin hetalia, lh: uruguay, lh: argentina

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zulenha August 27 2013, 15:22:47 UTC
Oh my gooooooodddddddd what an adorable fic ;A; I'm going to cry at the sheer SWEETNESS of it ;AAA; I had giggling fits so many times while reading, and aaaawwww'd so often, that I'm surprised my mom didn't come give me a weird look yet. <3<3

Lemme tell you, having babysat a crying/screaming kid (my baby sister) many times before, I felt an intense connection with Luciano throughout this whole... adventure. He should know better than to think he could peacefully watch anything with a baby other than Discovery Kids or a kiddie DVD. Honestly, Lu, honestly. /shakes head darkly

Luci's bff-ness with Sebby is like. MY FAVORITE THING IN THE WORLD. Ok, one of my favorites. And Tincho calling for "Eba" just about melted my heart, geez (even though it took me a moment to understand why he was saying that - "eba" is like "yay" in Brazil 8DD). He sounded so BETRAYED that his cousin would leave him alone with some strange dude in a silly yellow shirt!

Really, REALLY, this was amazingly written and ridiculously fluffy <3 I think I've told you ( ... )

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oxiosa August 28 2013, 15:27:41 UTC
I bet Martín just wanted someone to play with, that's all :( But nooo, Luciano was too busy watching that silly game to pay attention to him. Men.

I find Luci and Sebas' bff-ness utterly ridiculous, and yet flawless. Oh, absolutely. Martín did fell completly betrayed. He was planing a night of disturbing fun with Sebastián, and Luciano ruined everything. Mean Sebastián and silly Luciano >A<

"Some strange dude in a silly yellow shirt" is the perfect definition as how Tinchito saw Luciano indeed, couldn't have said it better myself uwu

Ah! We use the 'eba' as well. I think. I mean, I do and I know people who do too, but I'm not sure it's a thing here? But we write it "eva", and it's more like a surprised encouraging thing, in a "Damn!" or a "Yeehaw!" or a "Woooooh!" kind of way :I

Eeeeeeeeeeh thank you, your comments are always the sweetest thing <3<3 I'm always so so happy to hear from you, thank you!!

I highly approve of that *w* What's better than latinbabies?

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oxiosa August 29 2013, 21:48:23 UTC
Ok, I just inocently checked your tumblr and saw what you did there, and all I can say it's that THAT'S COMPLETLY ADORABLE UGHHHH He looks so cute, I can't even- I don't even know where to start!!! Now if you excuse me, I'll be just here, lying facedown squealing and sobbing

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zulenha September 4 2013, 12:00:42 UTC
I'M GLAD YOU SAW IT <3<3<3 I totally forgot to link you to it after I posted it, bluh. I wanted to draw Tincho sleeping and drooling on Luci's chest but then I realized that would be spoiling the end of the fic. 8D;;; I'M HAPPY YOU LIKED IT THOUGH <3

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berseker August 28 2013, 16:07:32 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAAW this was so insanely cute. Martín is such a terrible adorable baby, the precious little monster. I bet Lulu won't want to give him back.

And Lulu is such a cute idiot. He cares more about his tshirt than about the baby he's supposed to be watching, how sweet <3 PERFECT BABY SITTER. I bet it was Tinchito's fault that Argentina scored first.

This was a really sweet fic. I was so glad when I saw you had posted something o//

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oxiosa August 29 2013, 21:40:14 UTC
Eeeh I'm really glad you think so <3 Luciano will definately miss him, and I bet so will Martín. But that's a secret.

I'm so glad because I wrote that and smiled and shoke my head at him too. Whaaaaaaaaaaat what makes you think that, Tinchito is just an innocent baby 8)YOU HAVE NO PROOF

I was really glad I got to post something too FINALLY. I've been so blocled for so long lately :T

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onionnekoryuu February 9 2014, 08:25:24 UTC
Your baby Tincho was the best thing ever. BEST THING. EVER. I loved how Tincho wanted to sleep on Lu and how Lu let him wah wah that was adorable! But my fav part was totally Tincho clinging to Seba's pants <3 THIS WAS GREAT KEEP IT UP!

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oxiosa February 10 2014, 23:32:14 UTC
I'm so glad to know you think so, I had so much fun writing him *w* Luciano was moved. ALL THIS TIME I THOUGHT YOU HATED ME, MARTINHO ;A;

... I thought about an extra chapter setting a couple of years later with a slightly older Martín. If Luciano had troubles with a toddler who could barely move around by himself can you imagine a naughty sneaky little boy? 8D

Thank you so much for the comments!! <3

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onionnekoryuu February 11 2014, 00:37:41 UTC
YOU SHOULD ADD AN EXTRA CHAPTER YES //SHOT with Sebas and Lu and Dani taking Tininho to the park and then someone asks Daniel for a quick car fix and Sebas has to go get everyone something to eat or something and they're both busy and hand Lu Tintin's leash (you know the baby leash thing? idk the name) and Tintin drags Lu around until they get lost and an odissey begins //shot

Nah pfft it was really a pleasure to read! It made my morning xD!

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oxiosa February 11 2014, 12:58:45 UTC
I'LL SEE WHAT I CAN DO OK I WON'T MAKE PROMISES I WON'T KEEP that would just be wrong and mean :(

... well... that was surprinsigly similiar to what I had in mind :I Oh God no, not a leash, poor thing D: It always breaks my heart to see little kids on leashed besides things would get easier for Luciano and that would be no fun, wouldn it?

Glad to hear so! uwu

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