Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension)

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the

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Was There Ever?, Stargate SG-1, Daniel/Sam, anger

[wisdomeagle]

Sam's hands in Daniel's hair should be reminiscent, the same, stiff, starched hair, just wet from showering, his jaw firm and familiar under her fingers, but it's not. It's all new. Daniel's whimpering and her keeping are new music, and she slides her hands helplessly from cheeks to hair and back, pushing, gently, for deeper thrusting, and Daniel's working, intent, meticulous, methodical, relearning the curves of her thighs as they round into her vulva. This is all new. The tip of his tongue, tender and cautious, finds her labia and follows them upwards to her clitoris, and he's so gentle she's ticklish and so skittish she's mad. Daniel's eaten her out so often they have traditions. Daniel knew he could slip into her sleeping bag any night, that she was always open for him, that he could slide a finger into her and she'd be wet almost instantly, would thrust toward him half-asleep and slip into a kiss, that her lips were insistent if not healing, reliable if not loving. Her Daniel never needed encouragement to move from clit to cunt,

Re: Was There Ever?, Stargate SG-1, Daniel/Sam, anger

[shutthef_up]

Oh, so good and achy! Excellent reflection on how different newDaniel might be!

I like!

Re: Was There Ever?, Stargate SG-1, Daniel/Sam, anger

[wisdomeagle]

Thank you.

Re: Was There Ever?, Stargate SG-1, Daniel/Sam, anger

[advection]

Oh, that's wonderful. It's neat how, to me, new Daniel seems as hot as old Daniel, but for Sam the difference is frustrating and lonely-making. Love how the poignancy and near-spookiness and eroticism weave together, how much is going on here all at once.

Re: Was There Ever?, Stargate SG-1, Daniel/Sam, anger

[wisdomeagle]

Thanks so much.

Re: Was There Ever?, Stargate SG-1, Daniel/Sam, anger

[zorb]

Yay, S/D in the porn battle! Mmm, mindfuck. So to speak. *g*

(Love the icon.)

Re: Was There Ever?, Stargate SG-1, Daniel/Sam, anger

[wisdomeagle]

*g* Yay!

(I heart this icon because every time someone mentions how Sam and Daniel are like siblings? I think of this and grin)

Re: Was There Ever?, Stargate SG-1, Daniel/Sam, anger

[zats_clear]

I was just talking about Sam/Daniel post-Fallen in posts the other day and then you go and write this...which so perfectly describes why there isn't really any more Sam/Daniel after he Descends. I feel Sam's anger and frustration here. Very well done!