Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension)

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the

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No More Lonely Nights, Supernatural, Bobby/Ellen, Aftermath

[zinfic]

A/N: This isn't so much porn as what happens after porn. It's also the first thing I've written in the SPN fandom, so your thoughts are appreciated.

She wakes to the smell of dusty old books and sweaty sheets. Beard burn on the inside of her thighs, a stinging red rash. It hurts a little, pain just on the right side of good. She's sore and spent, can still feel his lips against her skin, his fingers on her breasts and hips, his weight coming to rest between her legs.

There are faint bruises where he was a little bit rough, lost in the emotion of the moment. She lets her fingers slide over the marks, chart them, make them hers.

She wants them there.

His body is still beside her. Hairy, pale, bit of a beer gut. No one will ever call him beautiful, not even handsome. No one probably ever has. But like this, relaxed in sleep, his features softens. The gruffness fades away, the weariness, the deep sadness for all the things that could have been and never was.

It's been years, she tells herself. Too many years. She's allowed

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[oxoniensis]

That's gorgeous! I really enjoyed it.

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[zinfic]

Thank you, that's good to hear :-)

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[bewize]

Beautiful. I really like this piece.

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[zinfic]

Thank you!

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[anoneknewmoose]

Oh how lovely!

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[zinfic]

Thank you!

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[greenapricot]

I really love this.

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[zinfic]

Thank you!

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[zinfic]

Thank you!

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[cynthia_arrow]

That was really well done. Real, like I'd expect any fic about these two to be. I'd call it sexy, but I think the vibe here, in the afterglow, is more toward satisfied, which is perfect.

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[zinfic]

Thank you, that was just what I was going for!

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[minttown1]

This is wonderful.

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[zinfic]

Thank you!

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[twasadark]

Oh, beautiful and vivid. So nicely done!