Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) - Entry post 2

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) - POST TWO

We're running out of space on the first post (I don't want to limit feedback or responses at all), and we're only half way through, so I'm opening a new post up for entries. I am SO impressed with you all - thanks to everyone who's taken part so far for making this such a success. I've updated the

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Field Tested, NCIS, Tim/Tony, wall

[beatriceflaunts]

"Do you want to order pizza?" Tony calls as he stares at the sad state of his fridge. Tim doesn't say anything, so Tony shuts the door and heads towards the bedroom, which Tim disappeared into as soon as they got home. "Or maybe Thai? I've had this craving for garlic shrimp

Re: Field Tested, NCIS, Tim/Tony, wall

[casspeach]

Whoo boy, I love this. Take charge!McGee is hot like burning and I love the way he's aware that he's no longer the same agent he was when he started, the confidence he has now. But also his last line and how it's not entirely clear, given his smugness after, whether he's genuinely being solicitous, or merely drawing attention to his own hot like burningness, or a little of both.

Lovely. Thanks so much for writing it!

Re: Field Tested, NCIS, Tim/Tony, wall

[beatriceflaunts]

Thank you so much!

Re: Field Tested, NCIS, Tim/Tony, wall

[stephanometra]

"But you get to clean up the wall."

*snort*

Fabulous.

Re: Field Tested, NCIS, Tim/Tony, wall

[shetiger]

Thanks! :)

Re: Field Tested, NCIS, Tim/Tony, wall

[little_ozzo]

Hot like a hot thing! How will I ever get back to pretending to work now? ;-)