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Porn Battle VII (The Seven Deadly Sins)

Jan 25, 2009 18:48

Porn Battle VII (The Seven Deadly Sins) IS A GO

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Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic recrudescence January 26 2009, 11:36:28 UTC

When River finally takes a fall, the result of an ill-conceived equation and a screwdriver on the cargo bay floor, Mal gives her a knowing look and totes her to the infirmary ( ... )

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic serrico January 26 2009, 11:55:03 UTC

Oh, this is *good*. *Very* good River voice, all tangled reasoning mixed with underlying logic. And of course the sex isn't bad, either. *g*

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic recrudescence January 27 2009, 12:43:09 UTC

Happy the voice works for you! Nicest thing you can could say to me, srsly. =)

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic bluerosefairy January 26 2009, 12:06:02 UTC

I adore your Simon/River, you know this. But that last line? Caused me to shriek. I hope you're happy.

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic recrudescence January 27 2009, 12:43:56 UTC

Now that I've actually heard you shriek, I'm gonna take that as a very high honor. I love my CSI. =)

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic redcandle17 January 26 2009, 12:43:23 UTC

Awesome. Just awesome. :D

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic recrudescence January 27 2009, 12:44:15 UTC

Thanks very much. =)

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic elvensorceress January 26 2009, 21:00:25 UTC

OMG this is gorgeous. And so perfectly River. It does make you think, too.

Love it.
<3

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic recrudescence January 27 2009, 12:45:07 UTC

Wow, thank you. =)

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic angstbunny January 27 2009, 00:34:42 UTC

This was... amazing. Incredible descriptions. Surgeon-smart fingers. Goddamn.

And that last line. Wow.

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic recrudescence January 27 2009, 12:45:55 UTC

Alliteration and crazy space incest, two of my favorite things. Thank you for reading!

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic advection January 27 2009, 06:32:34 UTC

Enjoyed this one too -- beautiful and painful.

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic recrudescence January 27 2009, 12:46:26 UTC

Thanks. =)

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic deora_mystic January 27 2009, 22:08:53 UTC

Girls trade their bodies to men for far lesser things than forgiveness.
oh, wow. you wrote them so intense and plain wrong. it's really fascinating. (i mean, besides the nnnngggh factor :p)
great job :)

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic recrudescence January 28 2009, 11:48:04 UTC

Thanks!

Re: Chameleonic, Firefly, Simon/River, genetic master_kogane January 30 2009, 15:10:08 UTC

The last line broke me a bit, I think ♥

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